User talk:Brittany Floyd/sandbox

From Dr. Cohen: I am not sure of the relevance of the topic of couple interviews so I would suggest a focus on wrinkles. I like the idea of what might be advantages and disadvantages. I am curious about the cultural aspects of this. Why do we have such negative views on this in our society?

Anna's peer review

The first and third citations are for references that are more than 5 years old. The sections for sleep wrinkles and animals with wrinkles should be taken out (as I saw this was already stated in your sandbox/draft). There were other references older than 5 years as well, but I am not sure if that was apart of the existing article or your draft. You could add a section for stress related wrinkles (could refer to SES and life struggles), sun exposure related wrinkles, or genetics. For your prevention section I would add references to scientific/medical studies that prove which prevention methods actually work.

Anna-Mastrangelo (talk) 17:11, 7 March 2018 (UTC)Anna Mastrangelo

Brittany's Response

Thank you so much for the big help Anna. I really appreciate it. I will work on building more to my topic with the references. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Brittany Floyd (talk • contribs) 03:46, 21 March 2018 (UTC)