User talk:Brionema
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[edit]Hello, Brionema, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Adam and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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Peer Review: Shauna Collins
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mithat_Bereket (Links to an external site.) I think that the reformatting of the article makes the the article easier to read. The new format style makes the article flow better and makes it less choppy. Also, the wikilinks added was essential. Prior to these links being added the article mentioned people, topics, ideas, etc. that are not common knowledge, so this improved the flow as well. Possibly consider making the lead a little bit longer just with some more back ground information. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Collsh0311 (talk • contribs) 20:50, 19 February 2016 (UTC)
Peer Review; Brian
[edit]I like the structure of your lead section, but I would consider consolidating a bit in the spirit of more coherence. I also would take out the long list of people that he has interviewed from the lead, it takes up far too much of the page. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Bri rei (talk • contribs) 18:53, 20 February 2016 (UTC)
Peer Review: Jack Schmitz
[edit]Ok Brionema, I think you did a good job of making the lead section better and it makes it much better to read. Although i do think you should get rid of the list of names, it is unnecessary and they would work better in the actual article. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Jackschmitz (talk • contribs) 01:43, 21 February 2016 (UTC)