User talk:Bri rei
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[edit]Hello, Bri rei, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Adam and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Adam (Wiki Ed) (talk) 16:02, 5 February 2016 (UTC)
Peer Review; Brionema
[edit]I support the inclusion of the new headings to invite more information but I think there should be solid information to back up each heading. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Brionema (talk • contribs) 04:10, 19 February 2016 (UTC)
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Peer Review: Shauna Collins I also think that the new headings are helpful and beneficial to the format/flow of the article. I think that there are some specifics in the lead that could be explained more thoroughly in other sections of the article. I think that some more background/basic knowledge about the queen may be beneficial to the article, specifically in the "early life" paragraph. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Collsh0311 (talk • contribs) 01:11, 21 February 2016 (UTC)
Peer Review: Jack Schmitz
[edit]Ok Brian, The work that you did on this lead was nothing short of amazing. Well formulated and gives the reader a great idea as to what the page will be about. Thank you for your contributions to the wikipedia world. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Jackschmitz (talk • contribs) 01:33, 21 February 2016 (UTC)
- Copyedit. Correct exactly WRONG word choice: defuse crises (reduce the danger or tension in (a difficult situation), not diffuse them (spread or cause to spread over a wide area or among a large number of people)!