User talk:Brendacelio/sandbox
Daisy's Peer Review
[edit]You have presented good information that will make a well fit contribution to the paper. What I would advise is to make sure that there is proper capitalization throughout the draft. You capitalized Mexico in some sentences and did not in others. Additionally, I would recommend to make sure that certain words are not repetitive. If you combine simple sentences, you can get rid of the repetitive terms and have the draft flow.