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Hello, Brendacelio, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 17:10, 22 September 2017 (UTC)[reply]

peer review from Wen Liu

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Great job with the editing so far! There is a lot of details in your article and you did a good job breaking them down into sections, which made it very easy to read. For your next daft, I don’t think there’s too much you need to add on, just remember to cite all of your sources properly. Maybe you could also consider combining the conclusion part with the consequences part, and expand on that. I don’t see any grammar mistakes in your article, so keep up with the good work in your next draft! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Breezelily (talkcontribs) 22:17, 22 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Chetsford was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.
Chetsford (talk) 02:15, 28 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]


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Hello, Brendacelio! Having an article declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Chetsford (talk) 02:15, 28 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]