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Your submission at Articles for creation: Shmuel Raviv (April 25)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by DoubleGrazing were:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of people). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Mostly unreferenced – where is all this information coming from?

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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DoubleGrazing (talk) 08:22, 25 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Boazraviv! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! DoubleGrazing (talk) 08:22, 25 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Managing a conflict of interest

Hello, Boazraviv. We welcome your contributions, but if you have an external relationship with the people, places or things you have written about on the page User:Boazraviv/Shmuel Raviv, you may have a conflict of interest (COI). Editors with a conflict of interest may be unduly influenced by their connection to the topic. See the conflict of interest guideline and FAQ for organizations for more information. We ask that you:

avoid editing or creating articles about yourself, your family, friends, colleagues, company, organization, clients, or competitors;
propose changes on the talk pages of affected articles (you can use the {{request edit}} template);
disclose your conflict of interest when discussing affected articles (see Wikipedia:Conflict of interest#How to disclose a COI);
avoid linking to your organization's website in other articles (see Wikipedia:Spam#External link spamming);
do your best to comply with Wikipedia's content policies.

In addition, you are required by the Wikimedia Foundation's terms of use to disclose your employer, client, and affiliation with respect to any contribution which forms all or part of work for which you receive, or expect to receive, compensation. See Wikipedia:Paid-contribution disclosure.

Also, editing for the purpose of advertising, publicising, or promoting anyone or anything is not permitted. It would appear that you have written about your father, in which case you must declare your conflict of interest (COI). Thank you. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 08:23, 25 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Advice

Hello,

Firstly, thank you for declaring your COI; appreciated.

I noticed that you've added several references to User:Boazraviv/Shmuel Raviv, to support the statement about patents held. While this is laudable, it does nothing to address the reasons why I had to decline this draft. What we need to see are sources that demonstrate that the subject is notable in Wikipedia terms. This can be done in one of two ways:

Either, per WP:GNG, you cite multiple independent and reliable secondary sources which provide significant coverage of the subject;
Or, per WP:NACADEMIC, you show that the subject meets one of the eight criteria listed there, along with reliable evidence which clearly supports such an assertion.

Please note that without satisfying either of these notability standards, this draft cannot be accepted for publication; therefore this should be your primary objective at this time.

We also need every material statement and anything potentially contentious to be supported by a reliable source. Currently much of the 'Biography' section is unreferenced, as is the entire 'Personal life' one. I appreciate that you have a connection with the subject and you may well know this information to be correct, but we can only accept content which can be verified from reliable published sources.

HTH, -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 12:50, 25 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you so much for your advice. for the moment, I have add 2 articles; a very detail one that was appeared in the official bulletin of the Chief Science the state of Israel and a second in the NY time journal. I will keep looking for scientific journals were he used to published his research results. BR Boazraviv (talk) 13:23, 25 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

April 2023

Hello, and thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia. This is just a note to let you know that I've moved the draft that you were working on to Draft:Shmuel Raviv, from its old location at User:Boazraviv/Shmuel Raviv. This has been done because the Draft namespace is the preferred location for Articles for Creation submissions. Please feel free to continue to work on it there. If you have any questions about this, you are welcome to ask me on my talk page. Thank you. - Rich^T|C|E-Mail 19:45, 29 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you so much. Danaland (talk) 19:51, 29 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Shmuel Raviv (April 30)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by DoubleGrazing were:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of people). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

The referencing is completely disproportionate. Large sections are without a single reference. On the other hand, multiple citations are piled together in a very REFBOMB manner. Please ensure that every material statement is supported, so that we can see where this information is coming from, which source supports what content, and how much of it remains unsupported. Also, the sources are not sufficient to establish notability per WP:GNG. If special WP:NACADEMIC notability is being asserted instead, please specify clearly which of the criteria 1-8 is met, and what evidence (rather than mere contention) supports this.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Shmuel Raviv and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

DoubleGrazing (talk) 07:46, 30 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:Shmuel Raviv has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Shmuel Raviv. Thanks! - Rich^T|C|E-Mail 17:06, 30 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you so much, it is really helpful Boazraviv (talk) 17:30, 30 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Shmuel Raviv (October 6)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Johannes Maximilian was:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Shmuel Raviv and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

Johannes (Talk) (Contribs) (Articles) 19:51, 6 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]