User talk:Bmheise

Your submission at AfC Grant Merrill (August 22)

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Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! Dori ☾Talk ☯ Contribs☽ 00:31, 22 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Grant Merrill concern

Hi there, I'm HasteurBot. I just wanted to let you know that Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Grant Merrill, a page you created, has not been edited in 6 months. The Articles for Creation space is not an indefinite storage location for content that is not appropriate for articlespace.

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Thank you for your attention. HasteurBot (talk) 02:06, 22 February 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Grant Merrill

Hello Bmheise. It has been over six months since you last edited your WP:AFC draft article submission, entitled "Grant Merrill".

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. HasteurBot (talk) 10:00, 25 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Sharp Park Golf Course (April 17)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Girth Summit was:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

The comment the reviewer left was:

The article contains no references - we need independent, reliable sources to allow us to verify that the information contained within the article is accurate. Please see WP:V and WP:RS for more on this.

You should also aim to avoid any promotional language - I'm thinking about phrases like 'preeiminent architect', 'the world's most esteemed courses' and 'fabulous views'. See WP:PEACOCK for discussion of that.

Finally, you should consider expanding the content a little to explain that this is a golf course. Remember that you are writing for the general reader who may no nothing at all about gold - saying it's a 'seaside links' is not helpful for someone who doesn't know what a 'links' is. You can include Wikilinks to other articles (e.g. Links (golf) to help you do this. Cheers

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GirthSummit _(blether) 08:44, 17 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Bmheise! Having an article declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! GirthSummit _(blether) 08:44, 17 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, Draft:Sharp Park Golf Course

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia! CASSIOPEIA^(talk) 04:55, 20 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]