User talk:BlakeALee/sandbox

Abui language page

Hey, Blake. Your page looks really great, lots of detail in the outline and very well-structured. You've added some good content so far! The first thing that strikes me about the page is the inclusion of so much non-linguistic, cultural information (which I know you discussed in class, I'm just bringing it up). It might be a good idea to make a separate page for the Abui people, but that's obviously beyond the scope for this class. I'd also suggest -- and this is totally personal preference -- to add some spacing between lines, especially between headings in the syntax section. It seems a little crowded and hard to read. Some examples in the syntax section would also better explain the more complicated concepts. Ashleigh813 (talk) 09:57, 13 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Fantastic article! The only small nitpick I have thus far is that I think you should rework the part where you list the parts of speech into a prose description. Your use of examples is especially good. Thank you very much Cephalopod (talk) 02:27, 15 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]