User talk:Bizdata

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Speedy deletion nomination of Draft:Trent Schroyer (author and lecturer)

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A tag has been placed on Draft:Trent Schroyer (author and lecturer), requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section G11 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the page seems to be unambiguous advertising which only promotes a company, group, product, service, person, or point of view and would need to be fundamentally rewritten in order to become encyclopedic. Please read the guidelines on spam and Wikipedia:FAQ/Organizations for more information.

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Proposed deletion of Trent Schroyer

The article Trent Schroyer has been proposed for deletion because it appears to have no references. Under Wikipedia policy, this biography of a living person will be deleted after seven days unless it has at least one reference to a reliable source that directly supports material in the article.

If you created the article, please don't be offended. Instead, consider improving the article. For help on inserting references, see Referencing for beginners, or ask at the help desk. Once you have provided at least one reliable source, you may remove the {{prod blp/dated}} tag. Please do not remove the tag unless the article is sourced. If you cannot provide such a source within seven days, the article may be deleted, but you can request that it be undeleted when you are ready to add one. ... discospinster _talk 13:20, 28 March 2018 (UTC)

Help me!

I have added source reference materials for the page Trent Schroyer, but "Problems with this page" still appears

Please help me with...

fixing the content so that it complies with Wiki guidelines. Bizdata (talk) 16:11, 8 April 2018 (UTC) bizdata@warwick.net

The person fixing the problems, removes the banner when they have completed their edits. There is no automatic removal of banners. Ronhjones  ^(Talk) 19:19, 8 April 2018 (UTC)

Your references seem to be either Wikipedia articles or Schroyer himself. Wikipedia does not consider itself a reliable source, and Schroyer's own writings are not the independent coverage we are looking for. Significant parts of the article don't cite any references, and for other parts I doubt the cited source confirms the statements it's cited for. So I'd say the problems still persist. Huon (talk) 19:25, 8 April 2018 (UTC)

Thank you for your guidance. I will correct and update.

bizdata

Concern regarding Draft:Trent Schroyer (author and lecturer)

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. Bot0612 (talk) 16:01, 30 August 2018 (UTC)

Trent Schroyer died suddenly Dec. 4, 2018. Bizdata (talk) 12:05, 22 March 2023 (UTC)

Speedy deletion of The Cranemere Group

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The page The Cranemere Group has been speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This was done under section G12 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the page appeared to be an unambiguous copyright infringement. This page appeared to be a direct copy from https://www.cranemere.com/news/our-story/, https://www.cranemere.com/, and https://www.cranemere.com/our-companies/. For legal reasons, we cannot accept copyrighted text or images taken from other web sites or printed material, and as a consequence, your addition has been be deleted. You may use external websites or other printed material as a source of information, but not as a source of sentences. This part is crucial: say it in your own words. Wikipedia takes copyright violations very seriously and persistent violators will be blocked from editing.

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Hello Dan,

1) Unfortunately, Trent Schroyer died three years ago, right before COVID (and shortly after he had asked me to add the content I did) and, thus, further edits were not possible.

2) I am the marketing manager at Cranemere.com and am in charge of maintaining its content. I will following your instructions here Wikipedia:Donating copyrighted materials. Meanwhile, I do NOT think that the page content about Cranemere should have been deleted, but will follow your advice first. Thank you. Bizdata (talk) 22:01, 10 January 2023 (UTC)

Hi, since you're the marketing manager at Cranemere, please also read WP:PAID, which has important information about conflict-of-interest editing and disclosures that are required by the Terms of Use. DanCherek (talk) 01:03, 11 January 2023 (UTC)

thank you, Dan, I will read it. Bizdata (talk) 01:04, 11 January 2023 (UTC)

After reading the WP:PAID section, I am NOT receiving any compensation whatsoever in exchange for my contributions to wiki content. Bizdata (talk) 01:07, 11 January 2023 (UTC)

I am still carefully reviewing the appropriate response to the sharing of original content and copyright info. thank you Bizdata (talk) 01:08, 11 January 2023 (UTC)

Speedy deletion nomination of The Cranemere Group

Hello Bizdata,

I wanted to let you know that I just tagged The Cranemere Group for deletion, because it seems to be promotional, rather than an encyclopedia article.

If you feel that the article shouldn't be deleted and want more time to work on it, you can contest this deletion, but please don't remove the speedy deletion tag from the top.

You can leave a note on my talk page if you have questions. Thanks!

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TheLongTone (talk) 11:55, 22 March 2023 (UTC)

Aswering yours on the talk page of this (now deleted) article, the problem was that it was written entirely like an advert. With the huge talking up of the banal or commonplace and loads of unecessary adjectives. I love copyediting articles like this to remove the bubbles of guff, but with this one copyediting would have resulted in pretyy much the entire article disappearing. So I slapped a speedy on in.TheLongTone (talk) 12:27, 22 March 2023 (UTC)

Dear TheLongTone,

Thank you for your prompt reply. I will give this a thorough makeover, as you had suggested. Stay tuned... Bizdata (talk) 12:52, 22 March 2023 (UTC)

March 2023

Hello, Bizdata. Thank you for helping to build Wikipedia-- the world's largest free content encyclopedia. The page The Cranemere Group has been speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This was done under section G11 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the page seemed to be unambiguous advertising which only promoted a company, group, product, service, person, or point of view and would need to have been fundamentally rewritten in order to become encyclopedic. Please read the guidelines on spam and Wikipedia:FAQ/Organizations for more information.

This article needs to be rewritten from scratch from reliable, third party sources unconnected to the subject. Wikipedia is an encyclopedia. It is not an outlet for promotion, advocacy, or advertising.

Information on content and common pitfalls to avoid can be located here and here, however be aware that this is not an exhaustive list. Pages can sometimes avoid these pitfalls and still be seen as an ad copy or unambiguously promotional, particularly if the editor appears to be a paid editor or has some other conflict of interest. Please review these policies, including the FAQ page on organizations to determine if this applies to you.

Common mistakes or beliefs about promotional editing center on the assumption that promotional editing only applies to promotion for commercial gain. Some tags or G11 nominations are met with confusion by creators, particularly if they spend much time reading or creating corporate documents, mission/vision statements, or similar copy for their organization. The frequent exposure to promotional tone may make it difficult to notice non-neutral phrases or styles, as the editor has grown accustomed to seeing it as everyday writing or speech. This can be difficult, but not impossible, to unlearn.

Another common assumption is that the prohibition against promotional editing applies only to businesses or organizations. Anything can be promoted, including a person, a non-commercial organization, a point of view, etc. and CV/resumé's are by their nature promotional.

Wikipedia is an encyclopedia-- subjects must meet notability guidelines with reliable sources that are unconnected with the subject and providing verifiable information. That generally means someone unconnected with the subject needs to have written a great deal about the subject. Please see this page on citing sources and Wikipedia:Common sourcing mistakes (notability). This page has templates you can use in citing your sources. Place the template {{Reflist}} at the bottom of the page, and references cited in the text will appear there. New article creation can be difficult, but the Article Wizard can help you. The new user tutorial can help you avoid future problems. You can also ask for help at the TEAHOUSE and on IRC chat. Wikipedia:The Wikipedia Adventure is a useful tutorial.

New article creation can be difficult and frustrating. Sometimes it is better to first gain experience by fixing and helping maintain existing articles. Wikipedia:Community portal/Opentask contains links to things that badly need doing, if you are so inclined. -- Deepfriedokra (talk) 12:13, 22 March 2023 (UTC)

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Speedy deletion nomination of The Cranemere Group

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A tag has been placed on The Cranemere Group, requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section G11 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the page seems to be unambiguous advertising which only promotes a company, group, product, service, person, or point of view and would need to be fundamentally rewritten in order to become encyclopedic. Please read the guidelines on spam and Wikipedia:FAQ/Organizations for more information.

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The Cranemere Group moved to draftspace

An article you recently created, The Cranemere Group, is not suitable as written to remain published. It needs more citations from reliable, independent sources. (?) Information that can't be referenced should be removed (verifiability is of central importance on Wikipedia). I've moved your draft to draftspace (with a prefix of "Draft:" before the article title) where you can incubate the article with minimal disruption. When you feel the article meets Wikipedia's general notability guideline and thus is ready for mainspace, please click on the "Submit your draft for review!" button at the top of the page. _signed, 511KeV ^(talk) 20:21, 17 April 2023 (UTC)

thank you; I'll add some independent reference sources. Bizdata (talk) 20:33, 17 April 2023 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: The Cranemere Group (April 18)

Your recent article submission has been rejected. If you have further questions, you can ask at the Articles for creation help desk or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help. The reason left by Theroadislong was: This submission is contrary to the purpose of Wikipedia.

Theroadislong (talk) 16:49, 18 April 2023 (UTC)

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Concern regarding Draft:The Cranemere Group

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 17:01, 18 September 2023 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:The Cranemere Group

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In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been deleted. When you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Liz ^{Read! Talk!} 16:47, 18 October 2023 (UTC)