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Your submission at Articles for creation: I am Jesus Christ (January 12)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Theroadislong were:

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Theroadislong (talk) 19:00, 12 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Benwah the magnificent! Having an article declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Theroadislong (talk) 19:00, 12 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Here are some proposed changes.

proposed heading: Background from scripture. Jesus was a central character in the gospel texts of the Christian Bible, notably Matthew, Mark, Luke and John. Old Testament prophecy spoke of a savior that would come, born in Bethlehem. Micah 5:2. ^[1]

Jesus was a controversial character whose existence is still disputed today. During Herod's reign he slaughtered innocent children under two years of age because he was fearful of his reign on the throne. ^[2]

Jesus began his ministry at 30 years old. ^[3] Information in the Old testament suggests that age 30 was when priests were tasked for service in the Tabernacle or Temple.

proposed heading: Why should we care? John 10:37-38 (NASB) If I do not do the works of My Father, do not believe Me; but if I do them, though you do not believe Me, believe the works, so that you may know and understand that the Father is in Me, and I in the Father.”

proposed heading: Impact from Ukraine war. As of February 2022, an invasion by Russia into Ukraine has made the situation in Poland precarious. Due to the publisher’s proximity to the battlefield, game development progress may be interrupted or delayed.

I am unsure how to report a possible conflict of interest. the author of this draft is a beta tester for the game title "I am Jesus Christ" so may have a conflict of interest. This position is voluntary and I receive no income or monetary compensation for it. As a Christian I think this topic is important and also relevant in our day and age.

More proposed edits are planned as information becomes available and time allows.

Benwah the magnificent (talk) 10:40, 28 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Managing a conflict of interest

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Also, editing for the purpose of advertising, publicising, or promoting anyone or anything is not permitted. Thank you. Theroadislong (talk) 19:00, 12 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Concern regarding Draft:I am Jesus Christ

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 19:03, 14 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, Draft:I am Jesus Christ

Hello, Benwah the magnificent. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "I am Jesus Christ".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been deleted. If you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Liz ^{Read! Talk!} 19:14, 12 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]

^ "Why was Jesus born in Bethlehem?". bible study.org. Retrieved 28 March 2022.
^ English Standard Version Bible (ESV ed.). Matthew 2:16: Crossway. 2016.{{cite book}}: CS1 maint: location (link)
^ Amplified Holy Bible. Luke 3:23: Zondervan. July 20, 2021.{{cite book}}: CS1 maint: location (link)

[1] "Why was Jesus born in Bethlehem?". bible study.org. Retrieved 28 March 2022.

[2] English Standard Version Bible (ESV ed.). Matthew 2:16: Crossway. 2016.{{cite book}}: CS1 maint: location (link)

[3] Amplified Holy Bible. Luke 3:23: Zondervan. July 20, 2021.{{cite book}}: CS1 maint: location (link)

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