User talk:BeBaFa

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Please see the advice on Wikipedia:Translation. The article you translated on Mikhail Stanislavovich Kaniskin is not readable English--and it does not follow the standard conventions on links to ohter WP articles-- see WP:Links

For example "In 2007, Malakov wore the married couple (Elisa Carillo Cabrera and Mikhail Stanislavovich Kaniskin) as principal dancer to Berlin." even the Google translation as "In 2007 the then director of the Berlin state ballet Vladimir Malakhow called the couple (Elisa Carillo Cabrera and Michail Stanislavowitsch Kaniskin) as dancers to Berlin. " is better, with a clear meaning, even though it does not read as fully idiomatic English.

In addition, the personal life section uses adjectives of praise --I don't know what the rule is in the deWP, but the enWP does not do this.

Please rewrite, or ask for assistance. DGG ( talk ) 00:09, 26 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Johannes Öhman (April 12)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Davisonio was:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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– Craig Davison (talk) 17:55, 12 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

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Xenia Wiest moved to draftspace

An article you recently created, Xenia Wiest, does not have enough sources and citations as written to remain published. It needs more citations from reliable, independent sources. (?) Information that can't be referenced should be removed (verifiability is of central importance on Wikipedia). As this is a blp (bio of a living person), almost every assertion should have a reference and a footnote. I've moved your draft to draftspace (with a prefix of "Draft:" before the article title) where you can incubate the article with minimal disruption. When you feel the article meets Wikipedia's general notability guideline and thus is ready for mainspace, please click on the "Submit your draft for review!" button at the top of the page. Onel5969 ^{TT me} 14:40, 28 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Xenia Wiest moved to draftspace

I fear the sourcing isn't sufficient yet. We need in-depth coverage by a preponderance of independent, third-party sources to establish notability. Based on her work, I'm pretty sure she can clear the notability hurdle, but that needs to be demonstrated with explicit references. Her own website and the Staatsballett site are not suitable for this - these are good for sourcing facts, but not for showing notability.

It appears that Ballett Journal has covered her multiple times. If you can specifically reference instances (i.e., don't just reference the tag search page) and these are suitably in-depth (i.e., not just passing mentions), that might do it. Further coverage by unrelated newspapers, magazines etc. would also be useful.

I've moved your draft to draftspace (with a prefix of "Draft:" before the article title) where you can incubate the article with minimal disruption. When you feel the article meets Wikipedia's general notability guideline and thus is ready for mainspace, please click on the "Submit your draft for review!" button at the top of the page. Elmidae (talk · contribs) 10:20, 10 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Draft:Johannes Öhman

Hello, BeBaFa. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or draft page you started, Draft:Johannes Öhman.

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been deleted. If you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion by following the instructions at this link. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it. — JJMC89 (T·C) 07:18, 10 February 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, Draft:Xenia Wiest

Hello, BeBaFa. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Xenia Wiest".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply edit the submission and remove the {{db-afc}}, {{db-draft}}, or {{db-g13}} code.

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. JMHamo (talk) 22:49, 12 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, Draft:Mikhail Kaniskin

Hello, BeBaFa. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Mikhail Kaniskin".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply edit the submission and remove the {{db-afc}}, {{db-draft}}, or {{db-g13}} code.

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia! CASSIOPEIA^(talk) 02:54, 29 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]