User talk:Bappi847564

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Amas Tenumah (October 5)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by 78.26 was:

This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability. Wikipedia requires significant coverage (not just mere mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject—see the general guideline on notability, the golden rule and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. Please improve the submission's referencing (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners and Help:Introduction to referencing/1), so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia. If additional reliable sources cannot be found for the subject, then it may not be suitable for Wikipedia at this time.

The comment the reviewer left was:

The sources are not independent of the subject. The "40 under 40" is a non-notable local award. The article is also highly slanted toward the subject, violating WP:N. Also, the article is in no way ready for mainspace from a formatting perspective.

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78.26 _{(spin me / revolutions)} 16:36, 5 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! Bappi847564, I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! 78.26 _{(spin me / revolutions)} 16:36, 5 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Amas Tenumah (October 8)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Worldbruce was:

This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability. Wikipedia requires significant coverage (not just mere mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject—see the guidelines on the notability of people, the golden rule and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. Please improve the submission's referencing (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners and Help:Introduction to referencing/1), so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia. If additional reliable sources cannot be found for the subject, then it may not be suitable for Wikipedia at this time.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Novice editors are often advised to cite at least three reliable secondary sources that contain significant coverage of the subject and are independent of each other and independent of the subject (not written, for example, by Tenumah or his employer).

ICMI and Argyle Journal have none of the hallmarks of reliable sources. The latter appears to be advertorial. The Huffingtonpost piece is an interview of Tenumah in a blog, with little analysis by the interviewer. The Business.com piece contains only a brief quote from Tenumah. The Norman Transcrpit appears to be based on a press release from Tenumah's employer. Even if it isn't, it contains only two sentence about Tenumah. Oklahoma Magazine is the draft's strongest source, but is barely 100 words long, not nearly enough to create a full and balanced biography.

Examples of articles of significant depth about a businessperson are [1] and [2]; look for substantial sources like those. Another way to demonstrate the notability of an author is through professional reviews of their books in reliable sources. Blogs, self-published sources, and user-generated sources are not reliable sources. Wikipedia is not for advertising, self-promotion, or public relations.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Worldbruce (talk) 17:45, 8 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Speedy deletion nomination of Draft:Amas Tenumah

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A tag has been placed on Draft:Amas Tenumah, requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section G11 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the page seems to be unambiguous advertising which only promotes a company, group, product, service, person, or point of view and would need to be fundamentally rewritten in order to become encyclopedic. Please read the guidelines on spam and Wikipedia:FAQ/Organizations for more information.

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