User talk:Arayofsunshine12

This user is a student editor in Yale/Issues_in_Medicine__and_Public_Health_(Fall,_2017) .

Hello, my name is Alejandro Nuno.

Hi suitemate!! :) Eqw55 (talk) 17:49, 24 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Yara!! Hope you are having fun as a Paulemur!

Hey, this is Jameel, keep up the good work!

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:30, 24 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Feedback

Nice work on your draft.

I can't give you feedback on what's missing. You're the expert on the topic, so you should be the best person to judge
Language and citations - see below
Images - again, this is something you'd know more about than me
Title: maybe "SARS outbreak among healthcare workers" or "2002–2003 SARS outbreak among healthcare workers"

Overall comments

Only proper nouns should be capitalized, both in the body of the article and in section headers
References go after punctuation, not before
Don't include external links in the body of the article, like you do linking to this file.

Lead section Remember that Wikipedia articles have lead sections that are supposed to summarize all the major points of the article, but not include anything that isn't already in the body of the article.

Don't speculate.

Much can be learned from this event so that all Healthcare Workers can avoid contracting disease from their patients in the future.

You can cite opinions by (named) people in a Wikipedia article, but you can't make predictions on your own.

User:Arayofsunshine12/sandbox#Background

Make sure you link to the main SARS article.

User:Arayofsunshine12/sandbox#Symptoms_and_Diagnosis

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User:Arayofsunshine12/sandbox#Causes_of_Transmission

Make sure everything is sourced. There shouldn't be any text after the last source in a paragraph.

Especially given the isolation of many SARS-specific units in hospitals, the collection of these disease-transmitting fomites was very likely.

This poses another way in which SARS could have been transmitted from the patient to the HCW.

These are speculation, and they're unsourced.

Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:10, 20 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]