User talk:Ansaarmohamed/sandbox

Comments on Bibliography

Ansaar: This is a challenging topic for this species. You have picked out one of the most helpful sources (Kusrini) but you should also check Jensen's thesis. Most of the web sources you have listed will have little info for you. It appears that humans are probably the most significant predator; you might give some thought to why this is. You have only contributed a few sources, one of which was a duplicate. Both on the spreadsheet and in your bibliography, complete citations should be given. A link to the source is not sufficient.Njclum (talk) 02:16, 12 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Comments on Outline

Ansaar: Looks like you've managed to extract a significant amount of information. Great job!Njclum (talk) 23:11, 21 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Comments on Rough Draft

Ansaar: Good job with a limited topic and good citing. Don't forget to italicize scientific names. Njclum (talk) 00:02, 13 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]