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Your submission at Articles for creation: CVX: Customer Value Exchange (December 11)

Your recent article submission has been rejected and cannot be resubmitted. If you have further questions, you can ask at the Articles for creation help desk or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help. The reason left by DoubleGrazing was: This submission is contrary to the purpose of Wikipedia. The comment the reviewer left was: This is not a viable encyclopaedia article draft. This is buzzwordy marketing blurb, written like a magazine article or a piece of content marketing. We also don't ask questions in section headings, or include 'conclusions'. It may be possible to write an encyclopaedic article on CVX, but this isn't it.

DoubleGrazing (talk) 10:46, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Ana Marketing Hear! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! DoubleGrazing (talk) 10:46, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:CVX (Customer Value Exchange) has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:CVX (Customer Value Exchange). Thanks! DoubleGrazing (talk) 14:08, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: CVX (Customer Value Exchange) (December 11)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Spiderone were:

This submission reads more like an essay than an encyclopedia article. Submissions should summarise information in secondary, reliable sources and not contain opinions or original research. Please write about the topic from a neutral point of view in an encyclopedic manner.

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please read Help:Your first article. Article needs writing as prose and not bullet points. You also need to use references per Help:Referencing for beginners

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:CVX (Customer Value Exchange) and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

Spiderone^{(Talk to Spider)} 14:10, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]