User talk:Alalch E.

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Welcome to my talk page!

I like to keep things compact, and don't have any great ideas for my user page yet, so my signature directs here.

I was a long-time reader and lurker (since 2003). I appreciate the Five pillars and the idea of open knowledge, and want to give something back; this is why I began editing in 2021. I'd like to receive your feedback on anything I've done. Expect a reply! :)

By the way:

• I prefer to keep discussions unfragmented. If you start a new talk topic here, I will respond on this same page, as an effort to keep the entire conversation in one place. By the same token, if I leave a comment on your talk page, please respond to it there, using the ping template like this: {{ping|Alalch E.}}. If you want to initiate a conversation with me anywhere else, simply ping me there—no need to notify me here.
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Your GA nomination of StoneToss

The article StoneToss you nominated as a good article has been placed on hold . The article is close to meeting the good article criteria, but there are some minor changes or clarifications needing to be addressed. If these are fixed within 7 days, the article will pass; otherwise it may fail. See Talk:StoneToss and Talk:StoneToss/GA1 for issues which need to be addressed. Message delivered by ChristieBot, on behalf of Lazman321 -- Lazman321 (talk) 16:21, 4 October 2024 (UTC)

Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Karin Van Der Laag (2nd nomination)

Thank you for your detailed and thoughtful analysis of the relevant notability criteria with special regard to this article. I appreciate your involvement. I feel I cannot contribute more than a neutral stance to this discussion, becuase of my involvement with helping the creating editor. You have improved my understanding of the points you have analysed, and I will use that to inform my own thought processes better in the future.

I will watch the outcome of the discussion with interest. 🇺🇦 Fiddle^Timtrent Faddle^Talk to me 🇺🇦 21:02, 16 October 2024 (UTC)

You're welcome. I was very close to entering a neutral !vote myself. —Alalch E. 21:17, 16 October 2024 (UTC)

Killing of Yahya Sinwar

I simply aded a second citation to the details of his injuries prior to death. That second citation is quite valid and should stand. --15:53, 19 October 2024 (UTC) Giacomo1968 (talk) 15:53, 19 October 2024 (UTC)

There's no point in accumulating citations for information that is already supported by a reference, in this case, a very solid BBC source. That doesn't help the reader verify information. —Alalch E. 15:54, 19 October 2024 (UTC)

Multiple citations beyond 2 are over-citations. Adding a second citation is valid because one validates the other. --15:58, 19 October 2024 (UTC) Giacomo1968 (talk) 15:58, 19 October 2024 (UTC)

No, one does not validate the other, where did you get this from? The point is to enable the reader to see the source of the information. This is not contentious information. —Alalch E. 15:59, 19 October 2024 (UTC)

What you edited it to — putting the second citation deeper in the text — is fair and valid. Thank you! --16:01, 19 October 2024 (UTC) Giacomo1968 (talk) 16:01, 19 October 2024 (UTC)

You're welcome, and thanks for reaching out. I also summarized the content in the lead to avoid repetition of the exact same phrasing in the lead and the body. —Alalch E. 16:06, 19 October 2024 (UTC)

Your GA nomination of StoneToss

The article StoneToss you nominated as a good article has passed ; see Talk:StoneToss for comments about the article, and Talk:StoneToss/GA1 for the nomination. Well done! If the article is eligible to appear in the "Did you know" section of the Main Page, you can nominate it within the next seven days. Message delivered by ChristieBot, on behalf of Lazman321 -- Lazman321 (talk) 17:42, 19 October 2024 (UTC)

Sermonizing in formal closes

Hi Alalch. You are mostly doing mostly very good closes. However, recently you are increasingly sermonizing in your closes, too much. Eg1, Eg2. A closing statement should be a summary of the consensus of the discussion. A little bit of spin is ok, but you are going too far. In the first example, you even extend on you own !vote, making the close an involved Supervote. Please be more conservative in your closing statements. SmokeyJoe (talk) 01:11, 20 October 2024 (UTC)

You're completely right about the text of those closing statements. I've been having some difficulty thinking recently because of outside factors (a bad cold mainly), and I should have stayed away from closing and commenting in discussions much. I'll be more conservative. In the DRV the nom withdrew and everyone !voted on one side, so there's no lingering disagreement at lest, but, yeah, could have and should have been closer to something like three words. Thanks —Alalch E. 01:24, 20 October 2024 (UTC)

StoneToss

Hi,
Were you intending on nominating the article for DYK now that it's received GA status? Your comment in the topic above indicate that you may be a bit under the weather and probably not a priority for you at present. If you aren't, let me know and I'd be happy to nominate it.
Regards, TarnishedPath^talk 03:47, 20 October 2024 (UTC)

I think it'd be the best if you would nominate it. I wasn't planning to do it. —Alalch E. 03:48, 20 October 2024 (UTC)

No worries. I'll think about some hooks later tonight when the children are in bed. TarnishedPath^talk 04:02, 20 October 2024 (UTC)

Done. You can see the nomination at Template:Did you know nominations/StoneToss. TarnishedPath^talk 23:32, 20 October 2024 (UTC)

Lark & Berry

Hi, I wondered if I could ask a question about the COIN thread for Lark & Berry. As per my comments there, I agree that the article is basically promotional in intent. However, if it's a UPE job then it's a pretty subtle one, as it lacks any of the basic mistakes that an unskilled UPE would make which would give the situation away (and which are seen at COIN on a very regular basis).

But what particularly interested me was that the user said that the gaming of the system was achieved after I read how to create an article the guideline says 10 edits and 4 days.

I don't think I see such advice on WP either here [1] or here [2], although the user would have located the 10/4 figures had they checked the autoconfirmed requirements. Clearly, however, there is nowhere on WP where it is inferred that one should game the system with gnome-like edits over a few minutes to allow oneself to push an article into mainspace. It's possible of course that they had read some advice off-wiki rather than on-wiki.

My impression therefore is that although the content and obviously non-independent sourcing of the article don't suggest a particularly advanced piece of UPE work, the background to the article creation clearly does (with the assumption that the user perhaps creates a separate account each time they create a new article to hide their tracks - as this article was highly unlikely to have been the user's first rodeo).

I just wondered if the above was broadly in line with your own opinion. Also, do you see any other indications of UPE here? I see a lot of blatant UPE work at COIN, often by users who (in fairness to them) genuinely don't know the rules around COI and thus edit under their real names etc. This case, however, I find interesting and would be grateful for the benefit of your thoughts.

On further point, I think the user's contribution at COIN demonstrates that English is not their first language, which suggests to me perhaps that they were hired to write the article at one of several sites that apparently exist. The likelihood that a non-first language speaker would naturally have alighted upon this subject to create their first article seems exceptionally low.

Any thoughts that you can provide around this case would be much appreciated as I'm keen to learn more about identifying UPE work.

Kind regards, Axad12 (talk) 02:39, 23 October 2024 (UTC)

"exclusively uses lab-grown diamonds" = "It's toasted"

Your thinking aligns with mine.

About the user knowing how to game autoconfirmed: IP users, when they try to create an aticle, get a system message that shows {{No article text|nopermission=yes}}, which says among other things You need to ... be autoconfirmed to create new articles. Ostensibly, that link is where prospective editors who specifically want to create an article would get the idea to WP:PGAME autoconfirmed and get to know what the requirements are. Presumably, guided only by the desire to create an article, they would essentially innocently make edits which seem harmless to them, but may be undesirable edits (of the sort often seen in PGAME editing, such as unwanted cosmetic edits, bad copyedits, overlinking, changing spelling for the worse etc.).

But, while a plausible scenario, it isn't something that happens from my observation. It takes an extra dose of motivation to behave this way, and the question arises: Where does the extra motivation come from? Given a PGAMEing SPA who created a very promotional article about a company (I actually think that this is very promotional: Special:PermanentLink/1252062458, because it very exactly relates the brand values and identity of this company), it's acceptable to presume that the extra motivation comes from being paid. Another pointer is that the references are not a natural sampling of links found on the Internet and are basically all sponsored-but-trying-to-seem-legitimate materials (on some of the web pages used, you can even buy the products). People might encounter such web content and interact with it spontaneously on a sporadic basis, but who would actively seek out large quantities of otherwise uninteresting content only to make their article seemingly comply with Wikipedia's verifiability policy? It's an unnatural human activity. —Alalch E. 14:34, 24 October 2024 (UTC)

And yeah, thanks for responding to the COIN thread and sharing these thoughts with me. —Alalch E. 14:36, 24 October 2024 (UTC)

Thanks for your thoughts here.

Agreed 100%, especially your comment on "brand values and identity" which had not occurred to me before but will be very useful when looking at future similar material.

I've noticed a lot of this sponsored but not clearly sponsored material recently, usually when declared paid editors working for Wiki editing companies include them in their edit requests. Under such circumstances, is it reasonable to assume that the story was planted by the Wiki editing company? I ask because the stories usually seem to date from about a fortnight before the edit request is received.

Examples of the general trend here [3] and here [4]. Axad12 (talk) 14:54, 24 October 2024 (UTC)

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Feedback for rewrite of WP:BITE

Hello, I have withdrawn the WP:BITE rewrite RfC since it had been stale for 3 months without any consensus (4 for, 4 against). I appreciate the feedback given there. I tried to incorporate your and SMcCandlish's suggestion to make the guideline include elements of persuasive essays. I would like your thoughts on the new lead, as the emotional aspect was the SMcCandlish's concern as well. Thanks, Ca ^{talk to me!} 14:14, 25 October 2024 (UTC)

• Wikipedia:Please_do_not_bite_the_newcomers/rewrite

Ca ^{talk to me!} 14:14, 25 October 2024 (UTC)

Thomas Sewell (neo-Nazi)

I've just nominated Thomas Sewell (neo-Nazi) for a GA. I've never done this before and I've noted that you have so I'd appreciate any guidance during the process. TarnishedPath^talk 16:00, 26 October 2024 (UTC)

Great. I'll add it to my watchlist and see if I might be able to help during the process. And before that, if I get any ideas for how to improve the article, I'll consult you. —Alalch E. 16:33, 26 October 2024 (UTC)

Draft:Ivy Wolk

Hi Alalch E., hope all's well. Not long ago you closed the DRV for Ivy Wolk. I'm wondering whether you think it would be appropriate to reopen a new DRV now that another strong source has come out (The Cut, October 25). I don't want to bother folks at large with repeated attempts, but I'm fairly sure the article would now survive AfD. Thanks, Hameltion (talk | contribs) 03:42, 27 October 2024 (UTC)

@Hameltion: Hi. Reasonably well here, but should probably be in bed by now. How about you? Please see Wikipedia:Deletion review/Log/2024 October 28#Ivy Wolk, and thanks for notifying me. —Alalch E. 02:12, 28 October 2024 (UTC)

Thanks again, appreciate your helping move the article along. Hameltion (talk | contribs) 03:31, 28 October 2024 (UTC)

Gerard Gertoux

Perfectly content to see it at AfD. I will remain neutral if so. If deleted it should be salted again, because that will prove I was in error for asking for unsalting and acceptance. I shall not be at all offended. 🇺🇦 Fiddle^Timtrent Faddle^Talk to me 🇺🇦 15:06, 29 October 2024 (UTC)

I've just collapsed a load of guff in the talk page there. I think the editor may be on their way to a NOTHERE block 🇺🇦 Fiddle^Timtrent Faddle^Talk to me 🇺🇦 15:14, 29 October 2024 (UTC)

@Timtrent: Thanks. I think it's fine that you made that enter mainspace, and agree that it looks like it could survive AfD. It's a questionable article, but it's not something that can't be tolerated until it's addressed. —Alalch E. 21:34, 29 October 2024 (UTC)

You may already have seen that this is now at AfD by my hand. I have done a deal of work inside it and satisfied myself that my acceptance was a good faith error. I invite whatever opinion you see fit at that discussion. 🇺🇦 Fiddle^Timtrent Faddle^Talk to me 🇺🇦 16:26, 8 November 2024 (UTC)

Thanks for the notification. —Alalch E. 16:27, 8 November 2024 (UTC)

Notice of edit warring noticeboard discussion

Hello. This message is being sent to inform you that there is currently a discussion involving you at Wikipedia:Administrators' noticeboard/Edit warring regarding a possible violation of Wikipedia's policy on edit warring. Thank you. The Blue Rider 16:19, 31 October 2024 (UTC)

Convenience link: Special:PermanentLink/1254826901#User:Alalch E. reported by User:The Blue Rider (Result: No violation) —Alalch E. 21:25, 2 November 2024 (UTC)

A friendly reminder to check the brakes

I think you may be going a bit trigger happy with the warnings in relation to the dispute at Tamara (given name). If they’re already quickly reverting the first template warning, they’re not going to react positively to a 4im 3rr warning. It would be one thing if this were a brand new account in need of having their rights explained to them, but they have several thousand edits. Needling them with further templates is unnecessary from a notification perspective and unproductive from a de-escalation perspective _signed, Rosguill ^talk 16:24, 31 October 2024 (UTC)

You're right about that. The templates I was sending them were the NOR ones to awake them to the manifest NOR problem. —Alalch E. 16:27, 31 October 2024 (UTC)

I think that the first warning was appropriate. After that...they may have yet to learn the lesson about OR, but you placing more warnings within 24 hours is not going to teach them anything. _signed, Rosguill ^talk 16:35, 31 October 2024 (UTC)

Agreed. When they removed the first one, that should have been it for that type of template. —Alalch E. 16:36, 31 October 2024 (UTC)

ITN recognition for Novi Sad railway station canopy collapse

On 3 November 2024, In the news was updated with an item that involved the article Novi Sad railway station canopy collapse, which you updated. If you know of another recently created or updated article suitable for inclusion in ITN, please suggest it on the candidates page. Schwede66 04:20, 3 November 2024 (UTC)

Maintaining Recent Article Improvements & Preventing Edit Wars

After following proper Wikipedia protocol to improve the Egregore article (announcing my intent, receiving no objections, completing substantial improvements), the recent reversion attempt is concerning. To prevent an edit war and document the necessity of these improvements: Procedural Steps Followed:

Discussion initiated regarding article issues by other contributors in (November 2020) and by me in (Sept 2024) No objections raised to proposed improvements Major rewrite completed addressing longstanding issues Attempted reversion (3 Nov 2024) without discussion This discussion opened to establish consensus

Core Improvements Made:

Policy	Previous Issue	Current Solution
WP:NPOV	Presented supernatural claims as fact	Frames content as cultural/sociological phenomena
WP:RS	Relied on self-published/esoteric sources	Uses academic journals and peer-reviewed research
WP:FRINGE	Gave undue weight to esoteric claims	Balances scientific framework with cultural context
WP:SCHOLARLY	Lacked academic context	Grounds concepts in established research

Key Transformations:

Redefined from "non-physical entity" to "sociological and psychological concept" Introduced Durkheim's collective effervescence framework Added peer-reviewed studies on group psychology Properly contextualized esoteric interpretations

The improved version maintains respect for the subject matter while meeting Wikipedia's core standards. Reverting without discussion undermines both WP:BRD and the collaborative improvement process. I request that we maintain the improved version and discuss any specific concerns through proper channels. --HyperSite (talk) 00:28, 8 November 2024 (UTC)

I appreciate your reaching out to me, and, yes, your desire to improve this article is valid. I can't imagine that any edit wars will be occurring. However, I share another editor's concern stated on the talk page that your rewrite has introduced original research. Do you mind if this discussion continues on the article's talk page to keep everything concentrated? —Alalch E. 12:44, 8 November 2024 (UTC)