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Hi Abbie, You have great information here and I like the subdivision. As far as edits, you should focus on making it more visually appealing. You have lots of text that are properly chunked into paragraphs, but it is a little boring to look at and read. You should add some pictures of different loung classes under the second header to break up the text, and add more links to other wikipedia pages in the text under the airport heating subheader. Also maybe rename subheader to not be the same as title page. Just a little cleaning up and you guys will have a great article.Bret martinsen (talk) 18:15, 17 May 2018 (UTC)