User talk:Aakinlana
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[edit]Hi! This seems to be a very comprehensive article. There is a whole lot of information that needs to be processed and reviewed. Also, as this issue is highly political and controversial, it is important to remain objective. I think the article needs to be more concise and better organized. It's a bit overwhelming. I'd suggest organizing each subsection into even smaller subsections, with clear title so that it'd be easier to follow. Some parts need more development too, such as "Financial Emergency" under Background. Goodluck!
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 14:33, 23 October 2019 (UTC)