User:Aakinlana

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I am a student at Soka University studying Social Behavioral Sciences and International Studies.

Wikipedia Article Peer Review

Flint water crisis I like that the article has a timeline of major evens from the Flint water crisis. I do think the time line isn't always complete thought processes. I think under the "Celebrity and corporate donations section" there is a lot of information that is either not known to the public or is not super relevant to the topic at hand. The lead states that the water sources changed because it was "less costly", why was Flint more affordable? Lots of the sources seem to be reliable for the random ones that I checked, there are a lot of sources to edit. The article seems to have a bunch of random information on the topic but it doesn't seem properly organization and doesn't always have a reason to have the information there. - Savanna