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Your submission at Articles for creation: Hwang-Long PAN (April 28)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by NP83 was:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of people). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

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NP83 (talk) 09:55, 28 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, 葉娟礽! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! NP83 (talk) 09:55, 28 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Hwang-Long PAN (April 28)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by NP83 was:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

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NP83 (talk) 13:23, 28 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Dear NP83,

Thank you very much for the review and advice. Would you like to help us to take the time to read the following pages,

Thank you very much!

Best wishes,

Jiuan-Reng

Wikipedia:WikiProject Taiwan 1000

This project is run by the Wikimedia Taiwan Affiliate in collaboration with a number of public museums in Taiwan. For any question about the project, please contact Wikimedia Taiwan.
All drafts created as part of this project were reviewed and audited at Chinese Wikipedia. Citation resources may mostly be in Traditional Chinese, but should all be eligible as "reliable" resources.
All project participants understand that Wikipedia is an open for all editor's encyclopedia, no contributor owns the right to any article. If any edit from the EN-WP community being questioned as inappropriately, please also contact Wikimedia Taiwan.
Contact Person of this project: General Secretary Reke Wang(rekewikimedia.tw).Please begin your email with the title "Taiwan 1k project" to speed up the process.

葉娟礽 (talk) 01:52, 1 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Lin Qiu-Jin has been accepted

Lin Qiu-Jin, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.

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MurielMary (talk) 09:44, 12 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you very much! 葉娟礽 (talk) 03:01, 14 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Hwang-Long PAN (September 19)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by OlifanofmrTennant was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

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OLIfanofmrtennant 17:41, 19 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Chien Lee (Taiwan composer) has been accepted

Chien Lee (Taiwan composer), which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.

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Vanderwaalforces (talk) 18:16, 3 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

November 2023

Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia. It appears that you translated text from one or more pages to another page. While you are welcome to translate Wikipedia content, here or elsewhere, Wikipedia's licensing requires that you provide attribution to the contributor(s) of the original article. When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, this is supplied at a minimum in an edit summary on the page where you add translated content, identifying it as a translation and linking it to the source page. For example: Content in this edit is translated from the existing French Wikipedia article at [[:fr:Exact name of French article]]; see its history for attribution. It is good practice, especially if translation is extensive, to also place a properly formatted {{translated page}} template on the talk pages of the destination article. If you have added translated content previously which was not attributed at the time it was added, please add attribution retrospectively for that also, even if it was a long time ago. You can read more about author attribution and the reasons for it at Wikipedia:Copying within Wikipedia. Thank you. S0091 (talk) 19:46, 16 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Hwang-Long Pan (November 22)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by MaxnaCarta was:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of people). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Subject does not meet WP:ANYBIO nor the subject specific notability guideline at WP:COMPOSER. Editor needs to demonstrate on the talk page how this subject meets any of the following:

Has credit for writing or co-writing either lyrics or music for a notable composition. Has written musical theatre of some sort (e.g., musicals, operas) that was performed in a notable theatre that had a reasonable run, as such things are judged in their particular situation, context, and time. Has had a work used as the basis for a later composition by a songwriter, composer, or lyricist who meets the above criteria. Has written a composition that has won (or in some cases been given a second or other place) in a major music competition not established expressly for newcomers. Has been listed as a major influence or teacher of a composer, songwriter, or lyricist that meets the above criteria. Appears at reasonable length in standard reference books on their genre of music.

If the article is resubmitted without this evidence, the article should be rejected. A warning to the editor, rejections are final. By submitting the article again without addressing this issue, it is open to editors to take this as a concession that you cannot meet the notability guideline and the article will be permanently rejected without ability to resubmit. Thank you.

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— MaxnaCarta ( 💬 • 📝 ) 03:57, 22 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

MaxnaCarta,

Thank you for the suggestions and help!

He has credit for writing music for a notable composition.

As a composer, his work Woodwind Quartet: Cause and Effect won the Juergen Ponto Kompositions Wettbewerbs in 1979, and Rondo: Piano Trio won the second prize at the Composition Competition of the West German Music Academy in 1981.

References：

MA, Ting-Yi (2015). PAN, Hwang-Long (in Chinese and English). Yi-Lan county, Taiwan: National Center for Traditional Arts. ISBN 978-986-04-7813-6.

https://www.ncafroc.org.tw/artsaward/winnerDetail@1231 葉娟礽 (talk) 08:08, 23 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Speedy deletion nomination of Draft:Hwang-Long Pan

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A tag has been placed on Draft:Hwang-Long Pan, requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section G11 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the page seems to be unambiguous advertising which only promotes a company, group, product, service, person, or point of view and would need to be fundamentally rewritten in order to become encyclopedic. Please read the guidelines on spam and Wikipedia:FAQ/Organizations for more information.

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Hello 葉娟礽 -- I've declined the above deletion request to give you a chance to address the concerns detailed above by MaxnaCarta with the draft. In addition to the advice they've given you about meeting WP:COMPOSER, there are other routes to demonstrating notability:

under WP:AUTHOR, for their two books, which would require multiple book reviews;
under the general notability guideline, which requires significant in-depth coverage of the person in multiple reliable sources (such as newspapers, journals, magazines or books) that are independent of the subject; these need not be online and need not be in English.

You can also ask for help at the Teahouse.

Hope this helps! Espresso Addict (talk) 09:08, 22 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I've also commented on the draft:

"I think the subject might well be notable; a quick Ebsco search found JSTOR 23512136 which says "Hwang-Long Pan, a leading composer and music educator in Taiwan" with a source: Ji-Min Luo, Gujin xiangsheng yinyuemeng [古今相生音樂夢：書寫潘皇龍，Music Dream from Ancient to Modern: Writing Hwang-Long Pan] ( Taipei: Shibao chubanshe,時報文化出版社，2005), 274-298"

Espresso Addict (talk) 09:32, 22 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Dear Espresso Addict,

Thank you!

Hwang-Long Pan is a leading composer and music educator in Taiwan. There are many books, research papers, and encyclopedias about this composer.

Because he has indeed won many awards, curated international music festivals, and been active on stages around the world, his introduction seems to be full of positive and affirmative narratives. However, the writing of this encyclopedia did refer to many objective official published documents. After being reviewed by the traditional Chinese version of Wikipedia, it was translated into the English version.

As a newbie to Wikipedia, I really need your help. If the modified vocabulary needs improvement, I hope some kind seniors can help edit it to make it more in line with Wikipedia dictionary standards. Thank you very much! 葉娟礽 (talk) 07:13, 23 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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