User talk:בילי

Your submission at Articles for creation: John Garcia Gensel (February 10)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Onel5969 was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Onel5969 ^{TT me} 12:43, 10 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! בילי, I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Onel5969 ^{TT me} 12:43, 10 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Welcome!

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Hey, I've been trying to get help through teahouse and other places to improve my article draft https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:John_Garcia_Gensel I have done my best to change the tone of the article, but would appreciate specific advise on any needed changes so I can have it accepted. I don't want to waste editor time by resubmitting it if there are obvious flaws that will bring to another rejection. Thank you בילי (talk) 22:03, 10 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]

I don't see any serious issues with this draft. Onel5969 may want to comment on what they saw as problematic. Huon (talk) 07:33, 11 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Huon - This editor has left requests at several places, and been answered by several editors. I left my response on the talk page of his draft, and am now backing away from this article. Onel5969 ^{TT me} 12:45, 11 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: John Garcia Gensel has been accepted

John Garcia Gensel, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.
The article has been assessed as C-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article.

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LaMona (talk) 17:05, 15 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]