User:ReaganCSMC

Potential Articles

• Ready, Set, PrEP
• 2004 Kumbakonam School fire
• Tea in the United Kingdom
• Larry Bright
• College Scholastic Ability Test
• Hurricane Luis

Reasons for Changes:

Ready, Set. PrEP

• Some sections of the articles come across as wordy and hard to read.
• The organization and formatting of the article could use some adjustments.
• Graphics could possibly be added to direct the reading.

2004 Kumbakonam School fire

• The main thing I saw here was the organization of ideas.
  • I feel as if we could change the order of the last three sub sections.
• I also think we could work on sentence structure, grammar, and flow.

Tea in the United Kingdom

• This article could be revised for word repetition and word choice.

Larry Bright

• This article could be edited for spelling and grammar.
• Citations could also be added to this article.

College Scholastic Ability Test

• This article could be edited for spelling and cohesion.

Hurricane Luis

• This article could be edited for organization.
• Spelling and grammar could also be a focus of editing.

Article Changes History

2004 Kumbakonam School fire

• The editing here has not changed the format by any drastic means.
• Most of the editing has come in the form of grammar and translating.
  • The article originally had text that needed to be translated.
• The only major formatting changes I could find was the addition of the Victims subsection.

Ready, Set. PrEP

• The editing here has not significantly changed the formatting in any way.
  • There was some formatting changes that occurred in line one.
    • The edit on February 11th 2021 added external links and multiple issues to said line.
• There were also more lines added throughout the editing history.
  • The original page had seventy-three lines and the current page has seventy-seven lines.