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Article Evaluation
[edit]I reviewed the article about Kopi Luwak. Everything on the page is relevant and it went a step further in implicating the animal welfare part of the coffee. The article seems to be on the neutral side even when talking about animal welfare as it only states the facts and did not describe the events in detail to gain the attention of the readers too much. The article is well balanced in presenting the different approaches for Kopi Luwak. Citations on the page all work well and will directly go to the relevant referenced article. Many references are from news articles but do not particularly note the neutrality on the article. Most of the information is up to date as there has not been a significant development in any area. Many suggestions on the talk page shows that the representation of pictures and the animal cruelty may be underrepresented in the article.