User:Joshua Jonathan/Paraphrasing

Table

1-10

Number	Diff	Source	Problem?	Fixed?
1	Indian religions	[1]	Close paraphrasing	Fixed [2] Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 05:24, 28 February 2015 (UTC)
2	History of India	[3]-[4]	Close paraphrasing	Fixed [5]
2-A	Hinduism	[6]	Close paraphrasing	Paraphrased diff and shortened diff Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 13:29, 26 March 2015 (UTC)
3	Gautama Buddha	[7]	Quotation marks missing in attributed and referenced info	Quotation marks added diff Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 05:42, 28 February 2015 (UTC)
4	Bardo Thodol	[8]	Sourced list of possible translations of bodhi and nirvana, as given by Freemantle 2001	Quotation marks added diff Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 05:47, 28 February 2015 (UTC)
5	Bardo Thodol	[9]	Quotation marks and reference missing	Aded quotation marks, attribution, reference. Missing reference must have been simply forgotten. diff Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 05:57, 28 February 2015 (UTC)
6	Hindutva	[10]	?	Text has been removed
7	Karma in Buddhism	[11]-[12]	Quotation marks missing in attributed and referenced line	Added quotation marks diff Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 06:05, 28 February 2015 (UTC)
8	Buddhism	[13]	Idem as 7; same line	Idem as 7 diff Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 06:10, 28 February 2015 (UTC)
9	Aro gTér	[14]	?	Section has been removed
10	Sarasvati River	Mukherjee, Ashoke (2001), "RIGVEDIC SARASVATI: MYTH AND REALITY" (PDF), Breakthrough, Breakthrough Science Society, Vol. 9 No. 1, january 2001	One word, maybe	Removed one word diff Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 06:16, 7 March 2015 (UTC)

11-20

Number	Diff	Source	Problem?	Fixed?	Comment
11	Sarasvati River	Annette Wilke & Oliver Moebus (2011), "Sound and Communication: An Aesthetic Cultural History of Sanskrit Hinduism," Walter de Gruyter, p.310 note 574; Catherine Ludvík (2007), "Sarasvatī, Riverine Goddess of Knowledge", BRILL, p.85; Witzel 2012	Qutation marks missing in attributed and referenced line	Added quotation-marks diff Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 06:38, 7 March 2015 (UTC)	refs in article already stated: "{{sfn\|Witzel\|2012\|p=74, 125, 133}}<ref>Wilke p.310 note 574 quoting Witzel</ref><ref name="CL">Ludvík p.85, quoting Witzel</ref>"
12	Indo-Aryan migration theory	[15]	paraphrasing?	-
13	Satyananda Saraswati difftool: [16]	[17]	Paraphrasing?	-
14	Language shift	[18]-[19]-[20]	Close paraphrasing	Fixed diff Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 06:26, 28 February 2015 (UTC)
15	Dzogchen	[21]	8 words "This transaltion (sic) became widely known and popular as"	Fixed: changed into "popularized as" diff] Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 06:48, 7 March 2015 (UTC)	Nice typos
16	Malasana	[22]	Quotation-marks missing in two referenced lines	Removed diff Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 13:13, 26 March 2015 (UTC)
17	Malasana	[23](see [24])	Close paraphrasing	Paraphrased diff Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 13:15, 26 March 2015 (UTC)
18	Hindutva	[25]	Combination of two quotes	Removed by Blades diff Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 13:29, 26 March 2015 (UTC)	Edit-summary by Blades: "we don't bring sfn style everywhere, these changes clearly require agreement", where-after he requested page-protection
19	Hindutva	[26]	Idem	Idem	Idem
20	Neo-Advaita (Ramana Maharshi)	[27]	No problem; properly quoted	-

21-30

Number	Diff	Source	Problem?	Fixed?	Comment
21	[28]	[29]	No quotation-marks in attributed and referenced line	Added quotation-marks diff Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 14:05, 26 March 2015 (UTC)	This one is really fascinating. Blades Googled "the divine, the absolute, exists within all human beings regardless of social status" and "as the essence of others will promote love and social harmony", and found Burman (2002), Hindu-Muslim Syncretic Shrines and Communities, Mittal Publications, which contains the exact sentences, but referenced to Lopez Jr. 1995, while I clearly gave Flood (1996) p.258 as my source. I can't check Lopez Jr. (1995) in Burman(2002), but Flood 1996 definitely also contains the same sentence. Donald Lopez (2004), Buddhist Scriptures, contains a nice overview. Lopez 1995 may be either "Buddhism in Practice", Princeton University Press, or Curators of the Buddha: The Study of the Buddha Under Colonialism, Chicago University Press. Unfortunately, Goog;e doesn't help me futher here, but it's curious...
22	[30]	[31] (realization of the nature of reality via , mode' (tshul) or a 'view' (lta ba) ... applied within deity yoga)	Close paraphrasing	Full quote diff Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 14:14, 26 March 2015 (UTC)	Great author; read him!
23	[32]	[33]-[34]	Tja... Close paraphrasing?	-	Close paraphrasing indeed; too close? I don't know.
24	[35]	Piya Tan (2004), The Taming of the Bull. Mind-training and the formation of Buddhist traditions, dharmafarer.org	Attributed and referenced quote without quotation-marks.	Removed whole list diff Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 14:32, 26 March 2015 (UTC)	This was added within a quotation-tag. It was not there anymore at 26 march 2015; I've removed the whole list, since it's very terse, and rewriting won't really improve it. I've added a note with a link to the site.
25	[36]	[37]	Attributed and referenced translation by Senzaki Nyogen (千崎如幻) (1876–1958) and Paul Reps (1895-1990); sourced by Buddhistdoor.com.	-	The "source" given here is one of many publications in which this text appears. Very sloppy work. Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 05:42, 11 July 2015 (UTC)
26	[38]	[39](see [40])	Words?	-	Tja... The Ten Bulls again; abundantly referenced. Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 05:42, 11 July 2015 (UTC)
27	[41]	[42]	Close paraphrasing in referenced text	Added Attribution and quotation-marks; changed paraphrasing into full quote diff. Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 05:47, 11 July 2015 (UTC)
28	Bhagavad Gita	[43](below of page)	Properly quoted and referenced text	-	The search-string even includes the quotation-marks which are in the Wiki-article... Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 05:50, 11 July 2015 (UTC)
29	[44]	[45](and long quotes)	Close paraphrasing in attributed and referenced line	Changed phrasing diff. Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 05:57, 11 July 2015 (UTC)
30	[46]				So, the characters {{sfn\|Doniger\|1999\|p=1017}} is a copy-vio? Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 05:43, 11 July 2015 (UTC)

31-40

Number	Diff	Source	Problem?	Fixed?	Comment
31-1	Smarta Tradition	Hiltebeitel 2013 p.18 [47]	pagenumbers, close paraphrasing, typo	Fixed [48] Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 07:27, 7 March 2015 (UTC)
31-2	Smarta Tradition	Hiltebeitel 2013 p.18 [49]	pagenumbers, close paraphrasing, typo
32	Indian religions	same as 31-1, 31-2	same as 31-1, 31-2	Fixed diff Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 09:05, 7 March 2015 (UTC)
33	Nondualism	N.K. Singh and A.P. Mishra (2010), Global Encyclopaedia of Indian Philosophy, Volume 1	No. List of links.	Nothing to fix.	A Google search on "embodies the very principle of enlightenment" and "knows no limits or boundaries" "which manifests in time and space"; none of these lines appear in the edit in question. Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 15:23, 25 April 2016 (UTC)
34	Nondualism	Advaita Vision, Discrimination	No. Qutes from website with quotation-marks and reference.	-	Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 15:32, 25 April 2016 (UTC)
35	Vipassana movement	Robert H. Sharf, Buddhist Modernism and the Rhetorics of Meditative Experience (see [50])	Close paraphrasing.	Changed a few words diff.	Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 15:41, 25 April 2016 (UTC)
36	Higher consciousness	Michael Whiteman, Philosophy of Space and Time: And the Inner Constitution of Nature	No. Qutations with quotation-marks and references.	Nothing to fix.	Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 15:43, 25 April 2016 (UTC)
37	Sunyata	Candradhara Śarmā, aja%2C%20the%20unborn%20eternal.&f=false-The Advaita Tradition in Indian Philosophy: A Study of Advaita in Buddhism, Vedānta and Kāshmīra Shaivism	No. Unless the word "fundamental" is problematic.	Nothing to fix.	Nice book, but subjective. Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 15:50, 25 April 2016 (UTC)
38	Nondualism	Leesa S. Davis, advaya%20and%20advaita%20Advaya%22%20is%20knowledge%20free%20from%20the%20duality&f=false Advaita Vedanta and Zen Buddhism: Deconstructive Modes of Spiritual Inquiry, quoting Murti, who follows Bhattacharya...	Murti: "A distinction ... must be made" versus "a distinction can be made". Trivial.	Line is removed anyway.	Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 15:58, 25 April 2016 (UTC)
39	Nondualism	[51]	No. Quotes with quotation-marks and reference.	Nothing to fix.	Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 16:05, 25 April 2016 (UTC)
40	Buddhism	[52]

41-50

Number	Diff	Source	Problem?	Fixed?	Comment
41	[53]	[54]	No problem:a ttributed, quotemarked, sourced	Nothing to fix.	The real source is Michael Hawley, Sarvepalli Radhakrishnan (1888—1975), Internet Encyclopedia of Philosophy, as is clearly stated in the diff. Sloppy.
42	[55]	words			[56]
43	Korean Seon ([57] (original article had that sentence, entirely different))	words			[58]
44	[59]	words			[60]
45	[61]	words			[62] or [63](an Iranian cultural...)
46	[64]	words			[65] "as the culmination of", and next few lines.
47	[66]	words			[67]
48	[68]	words			[69]
49	Hinduism	words			[70]
50	[71]	words			[72]

51-60

Number	Diff	Source	Comment
51	Kensho	words	[73] so is current [74]
52	[75]	words	[76]
53	Advaita Vedanta	words	[77]
54	[78]	words	[79]
55	[80]	words	[81]
56	[82]	words	[83]
57	Dhyana in Buddhism	words	[84]
58	[85]	words	[86]
59	Nirvana (Buddhism)	[87]
60	Four Noble Truths	words	[88]

61-71

Number	Diff	Source	Fixed?	Comment
61	Four Noble Truths	words	Added quotation-marks Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 16:46, 2 March 2015 (UTC)	[89]
62	[90]	words		[91]
63	[92]	words		[93]
64	[94]	words		[95]
65	[96]	words		[97]
66	[98]	words		[99]
67	[100]	words		[101]
68	Ramana Maharshi	words		[102]
69	Zen	words		[103]-[104]
70	Spirituality	words		[105]-[106] (including (12c.) )
71	[107]	words		[108]

72-80

Number	Diff	Source	Problem?	Fixed?	Comment
72	[109]	[110] [111]
73	[112]	[113]
74	[114]	[115]
75	[116]	[117]-[118]
76	Big Mind Process	[119]
77	[120]	[121]	Clear quote: attributed, indented with quote-template, referenced	-	?!?
78	[122] (174 words)	[123]
79	Vedanga Jyotisha (176 words)	[124]
80	[125]	[126]

81-90

Number	Diff	Source
81	[127] (131)	[128]
82	Mysticism (310)	[129]
83	[130] (135)	[131]
84	[132] (203)	[133]
85	[134] (135)	[135]
86	[136] 165	[137]
87	[138]	[139]
88	[140]	[141]
89	[142]	[143]
90	[144]	[145]

91-100

Number	Diff	Source
91	[146]	[147]
92	[148] 267	[149]
93	[150] 327 words	[151]
94	[152]	[153]
95	[154] 298 words	That is not available online anymore, text can be also found at [155]
96	Neo-Advaita	[http://ijrcm.org.in/download.php?name=ijrcm-4-Ivol-1_issue-1_art-6.pdf&path=uploaddata/ijrcm-4-Ivol-1_issue-1_art-6.pdf http://webcache.googleusercontent.com/search?q=cache:7KUjzxrmuBMJ:ijrcm.org.in/download.php%3Fname%3Dijrcm-4-Ivol-1_issue-1_art-6.pdf%26path%3Duploaddata/ijrcm-4-Ivol-1_issue-1_art-6.pdf+&cd=4&hl=en&ct=clnk&gl=in]
97	Pre-sectarian Buddhism	[156]
98	[157]	[158]
99	Ramana_Maharshi	[159]
100	[160]	[161]

101-110

Number	Diff	Source
101	[162]	[163]
102	[164]	[165]
103	[166]	[167]
104	[168]	[169]
105	[170]	[171]
106	D. T. Suzuki 114 words	[172]
107	[173] 101 words	[174]
108	[175] (101 words, 164 words)	[176]-[177]
109	Vipassana movement	[178]
110	[179]	[180]

111-120

Number	Diff	Source
111	[181]	[182]
112	[183]	[184]
113	[185]	[186]
114	[187] 457 words	[188]-[189]-[http://www.tonglen.oceandrop.org/Karma.htm ]-[190]
115	Dharma transmission	[191]
116	[192] 153 words	[193]
117	[194] 220 words	[195]
118	[196]	[197]
119	[198]	[199]-[200]
120	[201]	[202]

121-136

Number	Diff	Source
121	[203]	[204]
122	[205]	[206]
123	[207]	[208]
124	[209]	[210]
125	[211]	[212]
126	[213]	[214]

Other issues noted by Blades

Zen

Zen and Sutras

Matchable to:

[215] - JJ: quote, including tab and reference. Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 05:41, 10 July 2015 (UTC)

[216] - JJ: quote, including quotation-marks and reference. Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 05:41, 10 July 2015 (UTC)

[217] - JJ: quote, including tab and reference. Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 05:41, 10 July 2015 (UTC)

[218] - JJ: quote, including tab and reference. Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 05:41, 10 July 2015 (UTC)

[219] - JJ: quote, including tab and reference. Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 05:41, 10 July 2015 (UTC)

[220] - JJ: quote, including tab and reference. Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 05:41, 10 July 2015 (UTC)

[221] - JJ: quote, including quotation-marks and reference. Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 05:41, 10 July 2015 (UTC)

[222] - JJ: great source. Used quotes, including quotation-marks and references. Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 05:41, 10 July 2015 (UTC)

[223] - JJ: quote, including tab and reference. Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 05:41, 10 July 2015 (UTC)

[224] - JJ: quote, including quotation-marks and reference. Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 05:41, 10 July 2015 (UTC)

Zen ranks and hierarchy

[225] - JJ: Antaji, Nico Moehle. All quotes clearly indented and sourced. Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 10:05, 10 July 2015 (UTC)

[226] forked [227] but no attribution or wikilink - JJ: Added copied-templates diff diff. Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 09:16, 3 March 2015 (UTC)

Zen_Narratives

Only original section of a fork article is infringing copyrights - Comment by JJ: Zen-article became to huge; content was split-off, as explained. Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 05:31, 10 July 2015 (UTC)

[228] copied [229] - JJ: clear quote: attributed, indented, sourced. Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 09:34, 10 July 2015 (UTC)

Doctrinal background of Zen

Forked: Zen.

Comment by JJ: Zen-article became to huge; content was split-off, as explained. Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 05:31, 10 July 2015 (UTC)

Chan Buddhism

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Chan_Buddhism

Forked Zen: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Chan_Buddhism&diff=465607610&oldid=2820833

Comment by JJ: Zen-article became to huge; content was split-off, as explained. Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 05:31, 10 July 2015 (UTC)

Zen organisation and institutions

Forked article - Comment by JJ: Zen-article became to huge; content was split-off, as explained. Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 05:31, 10 July 2015 (UTC)

and copyvio, example :

[230] Copied : [231] - JJ: Clear quite: attributed, indented, sourced. Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 10:08, 10 July 2015 (UTC)

[232] Copied: [233] - JJ: Tja... A lot of book-titles are "duplicated," which may be expected when sourcing quotes and info. Summary of Koné's article uses phrases from that article; it's attributed and sourced. Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 10:13, 10 July 2015 (UTC)

Other Zen-stuff

Five Ranks

Version before :

https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Five_Ranks&oldid=394087227

After that:

https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Five_Ranks&diff=474912853&oldid=474911910

copied: [234]

https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Five_Ranks&diff=474911910&oldid=474910552

Copied: [235]

https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Five_Ranks&diff=465458537&oldid=463500775

Copied : [236]

https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Five_Ranks&diff=474918112&oldid=474915416

Copied : http://www.sacred-texts.com/bud/zen/mumonkan.htm

Zen lineage charts

Forked: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Zen_lineage_charts#History

Copied : [237], [238]