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Declined by DoubleGrazing 2 months ago. Last edited by Itunu Adejayan 2 months ago. Reviewer: Inform author.

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Alawa the fierce War Mercenary of Old ILe Ife

Alawa, an elder (Abore) of the Ife Empire has a rich history that intertwines with the lands he traversed. His tale begins in Ile Ife, where he resided until a distressing incident led to his departure. Angered by the harm that befell his son due to foreigners capturing images of the deity which led to his son being beaten with a charm, Alawa left Ife behind. His journey took him to Ake, where he briefly settled before moving on to Ajebo.

In Ajebo, Alawa's presence left a lasting impact as he took action against the local leadership, making a slave the of Baale of Ajebo. From there, his lineage continued with Oluwole, who in turn begot Beyioku. The legacy of Beyioku extends to Ikerekun and Kemta of Egba descent, highlighting the intricate tapestry of Alawa's family history and the connections to various regions. Odun Lakijala, which is yearly celebrated at Kemta, is symbolic to the Beyiokus. The oldest woman of the Beyioku"s family will be wiped by a masquerade before the cane will be used on other people.

Alawa's narrative unfolds further as he ventured to Iju Ota, collaborating with Akindele Gbelefa in a significant campaign from 1836 to 1853. Together, they orchestrated the conquest of Dahomey, Ilobi, and Ado Odo, with the Egbas eventually taking control of Ado Odo. This period marked a pivotal chapter in Alawa's life, showcasing his strategic prowess and influence in shaping the geopolitical landscape of the regions he traversed.

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^ The Politics of Gbalefa Pennisula, 2020 https://owulakoda.wordpress.com/2020/03/18/politics-of-gbalefa-penninsula/
^ The Egba and Dahomey War https://waidigbenro.wordpress.com/2023/02/25/the-egba-and-dahomey-war-1843-to-1851/

[1] The Politics of Gbalefa Pennisula, 2020 https://owulakoda.wordpress.com/2020/03/18/politics-of-gbalefa-penninsula/

[2] The Egba and Dahomey War https://waidigbenro.wordpress.com/2023/02/25/the-egba-and-dahomey-war-1843-to-1851/

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