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Critique an article
The article, titled "The Maui Pineapple Company," is clear and relevant to the topic. Each subtopic seemed relevant and intriguing. Nothing that necessarily distracted me, but it was interesting to learn that the founder of Ebay owns a pineapple farm in Hawaii. The article seems neutral and did not frame any information in a heavily biased manner. The information comes from Hawaiian newspapers, Pacific research journals, and pineapple research reports. These seem like neutral sources and no viewpoints are underrepresented. At least two of the links did not work when I checked the citations but there's no close plagiarism, but the information is up to date.
Why was Pierre Omidyar interested in the pineapple farm?
If the product isn't shipped to the mainland, is it consumed domestically on the Island?
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