User:HitroMilanese/Archive15
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If you can see the discussion page, I have given an answer about Amir Sarkhosh Thank you.Somali admon (talk) 10:31, 3 August 2020 (UTC) A barnstar for you![edit]
draft[edit]hello Sorry, I had a question In your opinion, this article is not good in terms of wiki and is not a complete article.؟؟؟؟ — Preceding unsigned comment added by 5.113.139.105 (talk) 21:35, 9 August 2020 (UTC) Nomination of Animal Scream for speedy deletion[edit]Just wanted to apologize for removing the speedy deletion notice. I was editing it and must have removed it mistakenly. Sorry. — Preceding unsigned comment added by StripedCucumberBeetle (talk • contribs) 06:23, 10 August 2020 (UTC)
Tomas Madl[edit]Hi there. You have declined my page about Tomas Madl when you said that more citation is needed. Could you provide me some more info about what exactly should I add or change? I have waited weeks for review and I want to make sure that the second time the result is different. Thanks! Petexner (talk) 08:35, 10 August 2020 (UTC)petexner
Rejected Wikipedia Article[edit]Hi, you rejected my wikipedia article suggestion. Thank you for our valuable feedback. I've updated it fixing the issues you pointed out. Do you mind re-reviewing it for me? Thanks so much! https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:PathCheck Sheshanks2020 (talk) 21:17, 22 August 2020 (UTC) Sheshanks2020
- There is ~ 4 paragraphs about pathcheck (formerly known as safe paths) in this NY Times article: https://www.nytimes.com/2020/06/03/health/coronavirus-contact-tracing-apps.html - This WSJ video features the founder of pathcheck, Ramesh Raskar during the entire duration of the video, talking about the org https://www.wsj.com/video/events/surveillance-and-our-privacy/79EDDCD4-A76A-475C-B61D-F2FAA9A304EC.html - This article is completely about Pathcheck/Safe-Paths https://www.techrepublic.com/article/how-an-mit-spin-off-is-using-contact-tracing-to-fight-covid-19-and-so-can-you/ - This was Ramesh Raskar's speech to Congress about PathCheck's contact tracing methods: https://financialservices.house.gov/uploadedfiles/hhrg-116-ba00-wstate-raskarr-20200708-u1.pdf
Sheshanks2020 (talk) 05:42, 24 August 2020 (UTC) Sheshank
Hi HitroMilanese,[edit]how is it possible to publish reliable informations about a software without using self sources ? For example the Wikipedia page of ZBrush ( another software ) use ONLY self source https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/ZBrush — Preceding unsigned comment added by U2Bleank (talk • contribs) 10:05, 24 August 2020 (UTC)
Reviewing the Draft of Rahul Mittra[edit]Respected Sir, Around 3 weeks back, I had published a draft on Rahul Mittra and it was rejected by you. I had gone through your comments and I accept the errors in the previous draft. I had re-submitted the article after 1-2 days of rejection with the best possible correction, but it has not being reviewed. I would like you to review the content once, so that I can come across the fact whether my draft is eligible to be a part of Wikipedia or not. I hope you do the needful. I hope it isn't an issue to reach you like this. If it is, do forgive me and I won't repeat it again. Warm Regards — Preceding unsigned comment added by Priyanshu1817 (talk • contribs) 14:34, 24 August 2020 (UTC) I would like to provide you with the link of the draft. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Rahul_Mittra Warm Regards — Preceding unsigned comment added by Priyanshu1817 (talk • contribs) 05:38, 25 August 2020 (UTC)
Respected Sir, I would like to inform you that till now the draft has not being reviewed, and it has being more than 3 weeks now. I hope you can do the needful and check out the draft and review it. Thank you for your time. Warm Regards — Preceding unsigned comment added by Priyanshu1817 (talk • contribs) 02:38, 27 August 2020 (UTC)
Hi, Thank you for your review. I will try to find more sources but if I am not able to, then are there any chances that the article might be accepted? Can you let me know more about it? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Priyanshu1817 (talk • contribs) 15:07, 28 August 2020 (UTC)
Hi, Thank you so much for accepting the article. You have being a great help in improving the article and I have also learnt a lot from your advice. Thank you once again — Preceding unsigned comment added by Priyanshu1817 (talk • contribs) 08:20, 29 August 2020 (UTC) Review Please[edit]i created pages but no one reviewed Xtools Pages --Prasanth202 (talk) 16:18, 25 August 2020 (UTC)
disambiguation pages i created Sorry for English --Prasanth202 (talk) 16:22, 25 August 2020 (UTC)
Resubmission[edit]Hi, I have republished the article with the changes you have mentioned. Can you please review it again and let me know. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Akshita Manocha (talk • contribs) 13:36, 28 August 2020 (UTC)
more clarity needed[edit]HI, I have noticed that artist https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Sajan_Mani rejected by you. Why do you think it is advertising ? could you please elaborate a bit
https://hausderkunst.de/en/notes/sajan-mani http://kampalabiennale.org/sajan-mani/ https://indiaartfair.in/sajan-mani-this-silence-is-violence https://apa-b.org/2003/12/23/sajan-mani/ https://www.deccanchronicle.com/lifestyle/viral-and-trending/171016/black-beauty-sajan-mani-talks-about-his-performance.html — Preceding unsigned comment added by Clubmate2019 (talk • contribs) 19:09, 29 August 2020 (UTC)
FF Rarri[edit]In your opinion what do I need to add to get my Wikipedia accepted I been trying to get live for months — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2600:1700:19C1:B4F0:18AF:7E02:B9B6:B9CC (talk) 15:35, 30 August 2020 (UTC)
Resubmission[edit]I've resubmitted the draft with the changes you have suggested. Please review it. — Preceding unsigned comment added by TheSciFiWonder (talk • contribs) 15:17, 31 August 2020 (UTC) article[edit]Hello, I have been trying to create an article for some time, which is deleted by a very reputable person, Stolly, for no reason, despite the reputation, because a bad user writes it.I ask you to create it . — Preceding unsigned comment added by 95.162.203.9 (talk) 06:41, 2 September 2020 (UTC)
thanks![edit]Hey, thanks so much for approving my article on Andrew McMillan (poet). I have another article pending approval, if you wouldn't mind looking at it? I'd really appreciate it. [[1]] Thanks! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Inchicore90 (talk • contribs) 14:30, 4 September 2020 (UTC)
About Aashu Patel Article[edit]Hello HitroMolanese, Your comment about this https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Aashu_Patel article is highly appreciable. As this article is about the journalist that's why I can not gather more articles about this, and not by him. I suggest you check other journalists and authors' articles in Wikipedia and compare the authenticity and reliable source of those articles with the article I did prepare. Please check https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dhruv_Bhatt and https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kanti_Bhatt and please make your comment accordingly. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Cgoju (talk • contribs) 13:34, 6 September 2020 (UTC)
References Provided[edit]As per your request we provided references from 2 independent and reliable sources where it is verified that the subject has won an Emmy award. If you need anything else, please let us know. Thanks! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Tbpusa (talk • contribs) 18:15, 6 September 2020 (UTC)
Reviewing Marina Bondarko model Draft page[edit]Greetings HitroMilanese, I've fixed issues which you mentioned in the morning, on Draft:Marina Bondarko, do check it out. As far as notability has concerned model being an Belarusian, has news in Indonesian & Vietnamese newspapers, this suggests model passes General Notability Guidelines... Shelikesme (talk) 09:19, 8 September 2020 (UTC) Query regarding Wikipedia page - Bansi Parimu[edit]Hello, I wanted to create a wikipedia page in my late Dad's name and I also maintain a website in his name (www.bansiparimu.com) my submission was rejected I think because I copied the bio from his website. The website is maintained by me as well, what do I need to do in order to have the page approved? Regards, Jheelaf Bansi Parimu (talk) 01:22, 12 September 2020 (UTC)
Hi, thanks for reviewing my article, I have added lot of reliable article links in the reference to support the biography after the first deletion , Will you plz let me know what kind of details are you expecting Regarding Eleiko[edit]Hi, You wrote: "Please see WP:CORPDEPTH. A company, corporation, organization, group, product, or service is notable if it has been the subject of significant coverage in multiple reliable secondary sources that are independent of the subject. It is as simple as that. Resubmitting without focusing on required resources is futile." Eleiko is a market leader, present on 185 markets around the world, partner of three major strength strength sport federations. European Business is a respected German B2B publication and the same goes for Mekpoint. How can you argue that those publications, as well as the sport federations themselves, are not reliable secondary sources?
Hello! Thank you for replying so quickly and giving me an insight on the problem. The thing is Eleiko is one of the leading companies, if not the leading company, in this industry. It has however been hard to find sources apart from blogs, online stores etc and other industry related sites and I figured they didn't "count" as reliable sources. I have also found really good Swedish sources but I was uncertain if I could use those. What's your opinion on that? This article for example (https://www.di.se/bors/telegram/78aac9e4-180c-4410-8e9d-653c04397244) was published in Sweden's leading business newspaper (i.e. the Swedish WSJ or the Swedish Financial Times) and it clearly states that Eleiko is a market leader. Can I use that source? Furthermore, I have no conflict of interest and I wasn't paid to do this (although I wish I was given the time I've spent trying to get this bloody article published:-)), I'm just a keen Swedish weightlifter. I'm uncertain how to sign my posts but I'll try. Zooboy0964
About Swami Vivekananda Medical Mission[edit]Hi, the new page I created was rejected because of 'lack of external references'. Actually I have provided 20 external citations and references. I have linked many of them to specific points in the narration as references. Hope this revised submission would meet with the Wikipedia standards. Would appreciate your feedback please.Lekshmis2002 (talk) 11:25, 19 September 2020 (UTC)
Hi, I read WP:Tone in detail. I have made an attempt to remove all adjectives and phrases that made it appear like promotion or 'advertorial'. I hope it is neutral in tone now. What remains now are statement of facts. There are a few statements on impact of this organisation on the community, which are in the nature of assessments. There are no sources for such assessments in public domain. These have been left as it is because in my view these highlight the uniqueness of this organisation as such and differentiates it from other organisations working in this field. i.e., methodology, holistic view and impact. Where impact is tangible and measurable, I will add some statistics. Where impact is intangible, it has to be described in words, minus the hyperbole or promotion. Did I understand your objection correctly? Would appreciate your feedback. If there is anything needs to be improved with respect to the 'Tone', could you please give one or two specific examples? Lekshmis2002 (talk) 06:54, 20 September 2020 (UTC)
Visual editing[edit]Thank you for the feedback on my entry. I want to improve it, but it showed up without the visual editing option in "Edit", but only "Edit source". Could you please make Visual editing possible? It will take so long to figure out the other way of editing. Thanks a lot. Sand7043 11:14, 22 September 2020 (UTC)
Draft:Pero Janjić[edit]Hello, Per your comment, I edited the article to remove the reference about Hall Of Fame. G. Radoznali (talk) 15:52, 22 September 2020 (UTC)
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Declined article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:OVO-TECH - issues resolved[edit]Hello HitroMilanese and thank you for the speedy review! I just want to let you know I have just added additional references which are totally independent of our company: https://www.wfxg.com/story/42381008/egg-processing-machinery-market-analysis-2020-global-industry-detailed-analysis-size-share-overview-by-revenue-competitive-landscape-key-regions-and https://strefabiznesu.pl/urzadzenie-do-dezynfekcji-wyprodukowane-w-starachowickiej-firmie-pomoze-w-walce-z-koronawirusem-w-szpitalu-zdjecia/ar/c3-15115610 (article in Polish) Could you please take another look and let me know if the article is suitable for publishing now? :) Oh and by the way, Forza Milan! — Preceding unsigned comment added by McG4evah (talk • contribs) 09:44, 30 September 2020 (UTC)
Dear Hitro, You have recently rejected my article on Sucharit Bhakdi, and claimed as a reason that he is not a notable scholar. That is a very remarkable claim, because he is one of Germany's leading scientist in his field who has won many scientific prizes, as I say in my article. You can convince yourself of this fact by looking at his German Wikipedia page. I ask that this decision is revoked and the page is published. Best regards, RzU78pzy12
Hi Hitro, which facts do you dispute? Then I can add corresponding references. Best regards, RzU78pzy12 — Preceding unsigned comment added by RzU78pzy12 (talk • contribs) 22:38, 2 October 2020 (UTC)
Dear Hitro, The article contains three references for the more important claims made. They are taken from the German Wikipedia and were obviously considered acceptable there. I am willing to supply references for any other claim made in the article, if you tell me which claim you are thinking of. If you do not think that the references that I have provided are good enough, please tell me why. Best regards, RzU78pzy12 — Preceding unsigned comment added by RzU78pzy12 (talk • contribs) 22:06, 8 October 2020 (UTC) Dear Hitro, As I just noticed, somebody else has just published an article about Sucharit Bhakdi, who was obviously better in handling the Wikipedia hurdles. Therefore, this discussion is no longer necessary. Best regards, RzU78pzy12 — Preceding unsigned comment added by RzU78pzy12 (talk • contribs) 16:48, 9 October 2020 (UTC)
Dear Hitro, you will understand that I see that a little differently. The sources for corresponding claims in my draft and the accepted article are exactly identical, which is not surprising, as both were taken from the German Wikipedia. That these sources were not acceptable when they came from me has nothing to do with the sources themselves, but rather with power structures within the Wikipedia hierarchy. You and the other author just have more "rights", while I do not have any. Fortunately, I had already some experience with how things go here, and consequently did not waste a lot of time with a hopeless enterprise. Best regards, RzU78pzy12 — Preceding unsigned comment added by RzU78pzy12 (talk • contribs) 17:25, 12 October 2020 (UTC) Gooroo (Company)[edit]Hi Hitro! Thank you for reviewing my submission for Gooroo (Company). You mentioned that there are not enough in-depth coverage sources of the company, but in the Yahoo!Finance source, the IBM source, BuiltinNYC, TG Daily, Parent Herald, 74 Million, New York Business Journal, and others, Gooroo is the primary subject of the article. I was wondering if you had any advice for what type of other sources you would be looking for? I can also reduce the number of references to the website itself, i.e. primary references? There are other pages on similar companies that have even less sources (e.g. CheggTutors) so let me know what I can do! Thank you again. Sam — Preceding unsigned comment added by SDHubJ (talk • contribs) 15:23, 2 October 2020 (UTC)
Hi! Thanks for taking the time to review my article submission, I appreciate it! I've reviewed the document you shared on NPOV but I'm having a hard time figuring out which parts of the article aren't neutral/formal. Would you mind providing a little more specific guidance so I can try to correct it? Thanks! Sarahgungor (talk) 16:44, 2 October 2020 (UTC)
RE:Comment[edit]Hello
Hello! We are waiting your next review[edit]Hello, I have wrote an article that has been declined by your review, the topic was Comma Entertainment Just wanted to tell you that I'm waiting for your next review. Thank you for letting me know why it had to be declined. But it wasn't really for the promotional purpose. There are many people misunderstanding about our company as a K-pop agency, and they are always submitting their resume. So we wanted to state the company is 'marketing agency' , not a K-pop agency. Also, our company is viewed & commented through foreign magazines and I thought people should know about our company clearly. We have reviewed other companies like us, which are Cheil Worldwide or CJ E&M They seem to have similar post with ours, and I hope to get your next review if possible. Thank you Wikipedian! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Alex Shin KOR (talk • contribs) 05:54, 6 October 2020 (UTC)
Article for submission.[edit]Can you help me look through the below article and verify that it does not meet the requirements for speedy deletion https://en.m.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?preload=Template%3AAfc+preload%2Fdraft&editintro=Template%3AAfC+draft+editintro&title=Draft:Ryan_Delanuez&create=Create+new+article+draft# Juwonbam (talk) 07:16, 9 October 2020 (UTC)
Thanks for reviewing my draft![edit]Hi, I recently submitted my very first draft page to Wikipedia, for The Untokening. I have resubmitted it with citations from big names in the field. NACTO, for example. I do hope you'll take a second look at it and let me know what you think. I'm actually writing because I tried to tag it "transport" and I was having trouble with that. Can you tag it or point me to a resource that will help me sort that out? Thanks again! — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2601:645:100:1D20:C4AF:9372:3A73:C94B (talk) 19:57, 10 October 2020 (UTC)
I did! In which I learned that Wikipedia is case-sensitive. I found help chat! They also helped me look over the updated draft because I wanted it to do well if you took a second look, and I removed the citations they recommended I remove. So now it should have quality citations. Thanks again again! |
