User:AshleyRenea

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Puppy Up Foundation

The Puppy Up Foundation studies the links between human and canine cancers using comparative oncology research. The foundation seeks to raise awareness about canine cancer as well as fundraise for the research of comparative oncology.

http://www.2milliondogs.org/

Puppy Up Foundation Rewrite

The Puppy Up Foundation studies the links between human and canine cancers using comparative oncology research. The foundation works to raise awareness about canine cancer and fundraise for the research of comparative oncology.

You have a really great start here. Clear, concise, and direct. I made a couple of very minor edits, but this is a great lead.

Hratliff25 (talk) 18:09, 23 October 2015 (UTC)