User:Alys62

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Short-term checklist:

• Work on Ghanaian anti-LGBT bill and probably expand LGBT rights in Ghana along the way

• Grammar/writing conventions
• Update and add new developments
• Consider reducing number of citations in the introduction
• Why is it repetitive
• Clause semicolons?
• Why are half the sentences almost completely copy pasted from news articles
• Mention (not in intro) that Akufo-Addo previously expressed willingness to give presidential assent if the bill had popular support, but is currently refusing to sign it until a legal challenge to the bill (elaborate) has been addressed.

Long-term checklist:

• Actually learn how to cite and link hyperlink

Expand:

• Charles Xue
• Chinese Apartment Art
• Rift lake
• William Osgoode (also check end of article, potentially incorrect verb tense)

Should I put this on my talk page instead?