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Round symbols for illustrating comments about the DYK nomination The following is an archived discussion of Yuki Kawauchi's DYK nomination. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page; such as this archived nomination"s (talk) page, the nominated article's (talk) page, or the Did you knowDYK comment symbol (talk) page. Unless there is consensus to re-open the archived discussion here. No further edits should be made to this page. See the talk page guidelines for (more) information.

The result was: promoted by Hawkeye7 (talk) 23:07, 16 March 2013 (UTC).

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Yuki Kawauchi

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5x expanded by Sillyfolkboy (talk). Self nominated at 19:57, 25 February 2013 (UTC).

  • Seems to meet the guidelines for a BLP nomination. My only reservation concerns the structure, punctuation and wording, which I think needs work(?) Perhaps it could be re-worded, e.g. "...that Japanese marathon runner Yuki Kawauchi shaved his head as an apology to fans after missing the London Olympics, following a poor performance at the Tokyo Marathon?" Grant | Talk 06:00, 26 February 2013 (UTC)
    • Yes it isn't quite right - I suppose I could drop the Olympic bit (it's not like it didn't have enough coverage) and just say: SFB 17:26, 26 February 2013 (UTC)
  • Unable to tell whether Grant's comment on "structure, punctuation and wording" referred to the original hook only or the article as a whole. The new hook needs review, and the reviewer should check the article to be sure it doesn't have those issues. BlueMoonset (talk) 02:57, 11 March 2013 (UTC)
  • This article is well written, new enough and long enough. The hook is well sourced and it is ready to go with ALT1. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 11:58, 16 March 2013 (UTC)
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