Template:Did you know nominations/Willow Kayne
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Theleekycauldron (talk) 00:53, 19 June 2023 (UTC)
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Willow Kayne
- ... that Willow Kayne wrote her second single in response to the reaction to her first? Source: https://www.thelineofbestfit.com/new-music/discovery/willow-kayne-i-dont-wanna-know
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- Comment: QPQ forthcoming.
Created by Launchballer (talk). Self-nominated at 19:18, 8 May 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Willow Kayne; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.
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@Launchballer: Good article but I don't find the hook interesting. Could you provide a better one? Onegreatjoke (talk) 23:11, 11 May 2023 (UTC)
- Template:Did you know nominations/Lamia Al-Gailani Werr.
- ALT1 ... that Willow Kayne received over 1,000 abusive comments after her début single was used in a TikTok advert?--Launchballer 07:40, 12 May 2023 (UTC)
- Not a review, but isn't ALT1... kinda not BLP-safe? Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 08:54, 6 June 2023 (UTC)
- Certainly it was missing a source, so I've added one.--Launchballer 09:22, 6 June 2023 (UTC)
- I wrote A Little Sound a couple of days ago and she and Kayne are both members of Loud LDN. I'll need a second QPQ for it, but I propose the following:
- ALT2: ... that the Bristol-based musicians Willow Kayne and A Little Sound are members of Loud LDN?--Launchballer 20:45, 14 June 2023 (UTC)
- Narutolovehinata5: Template:Did you know nominations/History of the British 1st Division 1809–1909. Please advise on the above hook (if not, I can do a solo nom instead).--Launchballer 08:33, 16 June 2023 (UTC)
- Probably better to do a solo hook. The idea used for this double hook is frankly not very interesting to a broad audience and not very hooky. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 08:40, 16 June 2023 (UTC)
- ALT3: ... that future Loud LDN member Willow Kayne won an Ivor Novello Award in 2021?--Launchballer 08:47, 16 June 2023 (UTC)
- Honestly I don't think that's much better. If the reader doesn't know the award or doesn't know how significant it is, the hook doesn't really mean much. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 09:47, 16 June 2023 (UTC)
- ALT4: ... that future Loud LDN member Willow Kayne went into music after temporarily losing her sight?--Launchballer 10:21, 16 June 2023 (UTC)
- Okay, that's a lot better. Thoughts Onegreatjoke? Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 12:27, 16 June 2023 (UTC)
I think that works. Onegreatjoke (talk) 22:40, 17 June 2023 (UTC)
- Okay, that's a lot better. Thoughts Onegreatjoke? Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 12:27, 16 June 2023 (UTC)
- ALT4: ... that future Loud LDN member Willow Kayne went into music after temporarily losing her sight?--Launchballer 10:21, 16 June 2023 (UTC)
- Honestly I don't think that's much better. If the reader doesn't know the award or doesn't know how significant it is, the hook doesn't really mean much. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 09:47, 16 June 2023 (UTC)
- ALT3: ... that future Loud LDN member Willow Kayne won an Ivor Novello Award in 2021?--Launchballer 08:47, 16 June 2023 (UTC)
- Probably better to do a solo hook. The idea used for this double hook is frankly not very interesting to a broad audience and not very hooky. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 08:40, 16 June 2023 (UTC)
- Narutolovehinata5: Template:Did you know nominations/History of the British 1st Division 1809–1909. Please advise on the above hook (if not, I can do a solo nom instead).--Launchballer 08:33, 16 June 2023 (UTC)
- Not a review, but isn't ALT1... kinda not BLP-safe? Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 08:54, 6 June 2023 (UTC)
