Template:Did you know nominations/Wer unterm Schutz des Höchsten steht
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The result was: promoted by Bilorv (talk) 03:23, 23 March 2021 (UTC)
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Wer unterm Schutz des Höchsten steht
- ... that "Wer unterm Schutz des Höchsten steht", a song paraphrasing Psalm 91, has been recommended to be used instead of the psalm in the liturgy of the hours, and for memorial services after disasters? Source: several
- Reviewed: Tara Downs
Created by Gerda Arendt (talk). Self-nominated at 21:38, 14 March 2021 (UTC).
- – I suggest a different wording that cuts out the hefty verbage of "has been recommended to be used". I've also capitalised "Liturgy of the Hours" as per that article; however, I'm not well-versed (semi-intended pun) enough to know the proper form, but whichever you use should be harmonised with the link in the article itself. Outside of this, the article was created within 7 days of nomination and looks good for such an obscure topic. It's right on the edge, but long enough. I'm not religious myself, but I know it has a very wide audience. - Floydian τ ¢ 01:50, 20 March 2021 (UTC)
- ALT1: ... that the use of "Wer unterm Schutz des Höchsten steht", a song paraphrasing Psalm 91, has been recommended instead of the psalm in the Liturgy of the Hours, and for memorial services after disasters?
- Thank you for the review and fine wording. Please see top of User talk:Drmies (about indenting, I did it here) - Every time I mention a psalm these days it's in memory of Yoninah who contributed A LOT to them. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 08:05, 20 March 2021 (UTC)
- ALT1: ... that the use of "Wer unterm Schutz des Höchsten steht", a song paraphrasing Psalm 91, has been recommended instead of the psalm in the Liturgy of the Hours, and for memorial services after disasters?
- – I suggest a different wording that cuts out the hefty verbage of "has been recommended to be used". I've also capitalised "Liturgy of the Hours" as per that article; however, I'm not well-versed (semi-intended pun) enough to know the proper form, but whichever you use should be harmonised with the link in the article itself. Outside of this, the article was created within 7 days of nomination and looks good for such an obscure topic. It's right on the edge, but long enough. I'm not religious myself, but I know it has a very wide audience. - Floydian τ ¢ 01:50, 20 March 2021 (UTC)