Template:Did you know nominations/Vanitas (The Case Study of Vanitas)

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The result was: promoted by Styyx (talk) 21:14, 1 August 2022 (UTC)

Vanitas (The Case Study of Vanitas)

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• ... that Vanitas' personality was inspired by Sherlock Holmes? Source: https://ddnavi.com/interview/808972/a/
  • Reviewed: Heart Gear
  • Comment: Alt 2: Vanitas was given the voice of Natsuki Hanae due to his multiple talents and the idea of the protagonist given more sex appeal?

Created by Tintor2 (talk). Self-nominated at 03:14, 23 July 2022 (UTC).

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook eligibility:

• Cited: - The source provided backs up the first hook but not the alt hook.
• Interesting: - See below.

QPQ:
Overall: Reviewing this because you reviewed my nomination. The first hook I do not find interesting at all; Sherlock Holmes is a very well-known work and has inspired many series. The second hook can be interesting, but it needs to be re-written. Perhaps this would be better: "ALT 1: ... that Natsuki Hanae was chosen to voice Vanitas to give the character more sexual appeal?" Additionally, since you have more than five prior DYK nominations, you must review another nomination or link to a nomination you previously reviewed. In the article, the source for the fact must be placed at the end of the sentence with the fact per WP:DYKCRIT 3b. Link20XX (talk) 04:06, 23 July 2022 (UTC)

@Link20XX: Okay how about: "ALT 1: ... that Natsuki Hanae was chosen to voice Vanitas to give the character more sexual appeal?" The last review I was the one from Heart Gear hereTintor2 (talk) 13:53, 23 July 2022 (UTC)

• "ALT 2: ...that Vanitas wears a hour glass-like earring that symbollizes his limited lifespan?
  • for ALT 1. As far as your ALT2, I am hesitant to say whether someone who has not seen the series would find that interesting. However, the issues regarding ALT1 seem to have been resolved and a QPQ has been provided so I approve it. Link20XX (talk) 14:49, 23 July 2022 (UTC)

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