Template:Did you know nominations/Thoriqul Haq

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The result was: promoted by AirshipJungleman29 talk 20:24, 13 April 2024 (UTC)

Thoriqul Haq

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... that after villagers in Lumajang Regency, Indonesia, rejected the construction of a church, regent Thoriqul Haq used municipal land and funds to construct one along with a musalla? Source: [1]
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Created by Juxlos (talk).

Number of QPQs required: 2. DYK is currently in unreviewed backlog mode and nominator has 213 past nominations.

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Juxlos (talk) 09:17, 20 March 2024 (UTC).

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QPQ: Done.

Overall: QPQ satisfied. Page nominated on the same day it was created. I'll AGF for the source's reliability, google translate seems to back this up enough for me to buy it. Spotchecks seem good, earwig is clear (In theory there could be translation copy-vio issues but this is beyond DYK's purview).

There is a number of issues with the hook. It's not terribly interesting how it's currently worded, and it very clunky in it's approach. Additionally, the article doesn't specify that it was the villagers were the ones who rejected it, just that the village rejected it. This could imply a number of different things.

@Juxlos: - customary ping. 🏵️Etrius ( Us) 03:45, 3 April 2024 (UTC)

ALT1: ... that after a village in Lumajang Regency, Indonesia, said it did not want a church, Thoriqul Haq took its land and money anyway and built a church along with a musalla? Storye book (talk) 09:56, 9 April 2024 (UTC)

That works much better. I made one minor modification. @Juxlos: What say you? 🏵️Etrius ( Us) 16:09, 9 April 2024 (UTC)

At this point, I'm willing to pass ALT1, Juxlos hasn't been responding to my pings (even though I can see their active). Thankfully, Storye book has provided a more workable hook to use. 🏵️Etrius ( Us) 00:59, 10 April 2024 (UTC)

Sorry about that. Procrastinated this hook specifically until I forgot. Juxlos (talk) 04:55, 11 April 2024 (UTC)