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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 00:02, 17 July 2018 (UTC)

The Awesome Adventures of Captain Spirit

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Improved to Good Article status by Cognissonance (talk). Self-nominated at 22:32, 7 July 2018 (UTC).


General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems

Hook eligibility:

  • Cited: Yes
  • Interesting: Yes
  • Other problems: No - I would suggest clarifying that Life Is Strange 2 is another video game, and that it's the player's choices that affect Life Is Strange 2 gameplay. It might otherwise seem that it's the developers' choices that affect Life Is Strange 2. No other problems with the hook.
QPQ: Done.

Overall: epicgenius (talk) 14:48, 8 July 2018 (UTC)

@Epicgenius: How does it look now? Didn't want to repeat "video game", hope this works. Cognissonance (talk) 16:33, 8 July 2018 (UTC)
@Cognissonance: It looks great. The hook is good to go now. epicgenius (talk) 17:07, 8 July 2018 (UTC)