Template:Did you know nominations/Tedros Adhanom Ghebreyesus
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The result was: rejected by — Crisco 1492 (talk) 13:25, 28 June 2013 (UTC)
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Tedros Adhanom Ghebreyesus
[edit]- ... that Tedros Adhanom Ghebreyesus (pictured) wrote his doctoral dissertation on the effects of dams on the spread of malaria in the Tigray Region?
- Comment: Can you self nominate?
Created by Simfan34 (talk). Self nominated at 00:46, 19 June 2013 (UTC).
- Yes, you can self-nominate! What's good: Article created June 18, over 11,000 characters prose, hook is mentioned in article, cited, and mentioned in citation, no copyvio detected, no QPQ needed, image looks good. What needs work: As this is a biography of a living person (BLP), any information which may be construed as negative must be cited; the "Controversy" section is short, but it lacks any citations. Work on adding one or two there. Better yet, "Controversy" sections are generally discouraged; see if you can incorporate the info from this section into other sections. Also, I've added a blank PERSONDATA template to the bottom of the page; this helps Wikipedia track articles on people. Please try and fill it in as best you can. Once these issues are dealt with, I think I'll be able to pass this article. BobAmnertiopsis∴ChatMe! 04:44, 21 June 2013 (UTC)
- Hopefully I addressed those issues!--Simfan34 (talk) 18:28, 21 June 2013 (UTC)
Looks good! BobAmnertiopsis∴ChatMe! 20:05, 21 June 2013 (UTC)
- Hopefully I addressed those issues!--Simfan34 (talk) 18:28, 21 June 2013 (UTC)
- Yes, you can self-nominate! What's good: Article created June 18, over 11,000 characters prose, hook is mentioned in article, cited, and mentioned in citation, no copyvio detected, no QPQ needed, image looks good. What needs work: As this is a biography of a living person (BLP), any information which may be construed as negative must be cited; the "Controversy" section is short, but it lacks any citations. Work on adding one or two there. Better yet, "Controversy" sections are generally discouraged; see if you can incorporate the info from this section into other sections. Also, I've added a blank PERSONDATA template to the bottom of the page; this helps Wikipedia track articles on people. Please try and fill it in as best you can. Once these issues are dealt with, I think I'll be able to pass this article. BobAmnertiopsis∴ChatMe! 04:44, 21 June 2013 (UTC)
- Parts of this article are copied verbatim from sources. See for example Duplication Detector for FN12 or FN9. Nikkimaria (talk) 04:22, 27 June 2013 (UTC)
- Wow, major mess-up on my part. Thank you for catching this, Nikkimaria. BobAmnertiopsis∴ChatMe! 07:48, 27 June 2013 (UTC)