Template:Did you know nominations/Saleh Djasit
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The result was: promoted by SL93 (talk) 00:46, 13 December 2022 (UTC)
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Saleh Djasit
- ... that Saleh Djasit was the first member of the Indonesian People's Representative Council to be arrested by the Corruption Eradication Commission? Source: [1]
- Reviewed: An Appeal for Human Rights
- Comment: -
Created by Juxlos (talk). Self-nominated at 08:38, 26 November 2022 (UTC).
Hi Juxlos, review follows: article created 26 November and exceeds minimum length; article is well written and is generally cited inline throughout to what look to be reliable sources (AGF as they are all Indonesian); you state his years of military service as 1967-1997 in the infobox but this is not cited or in the main text; his 1986-1996 years of service as regent also look to be wrong (article states he started in 1996); the dates for his membership of the council are also not stated in the main text or cited; AGF no overly close paraphrasing from the sources as I cannot read them (Earwig check is clear); a QPQ has bee carried out; hook is interesting, AGF on foreign language source but I have a query: in the hook you state first member but in the article you state "first sitting member", the hook should match the article (or vice versa, depending on which the case is). Also I feel who should state Indonesian in the hook, to provide context - Dumelow (talk) 09:08, 26 November 2022 (UTC)
