Template:Did you know nominations/Rapa Nui National Park

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The result was: promoted by PFHLai (talk) 02:51, 11 August 2013 (UTC)

Rapa Nui National Park

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... that Rapa Nui National Park's fame and World Heritage status is due to stone statues known as moai (pictured) whose creation is attributed to Rapa Nui people who inhabited the island around 300 AD?

Reviewed: Second article of Template:Did you know nominations/La Feria Chapultepec Mágico

5x expanded by Nvvchar (talk), Rosiestep (talk). Nominated by Nvvchar (talk) at 14:05, 8 August 2013 (UTC).

Article is very good. However, DYK rules require an inline citation at the end of the sentence featured in the hook. Also, I would suggest a short version of the hook (less is more). Something like:

ALT1: ... that Rapa Nui National Park is home to dozens of moai statues (pictured) attributed to the Rapa Nui people who inhabited the island around 300 AD?

--ThaddeusB (talk) 00:25, 9 August 2013 (UTC)

ALT2: ... that Rapa Nui National Park is home to dozens of moai statues (pictured) attributed to the Rapa Nui people who inhabited Easter Island around 300 AD? --Rosiestep (talk) 02:57, 9 August 2013 (UTC)

Even better. Just need a citation at the end of a sentence to support it in the article and we are good to go. --ThaddeusB (talk) 03:19, 9 August 2013 (UTC)

Thanks, ThaddeusB. I have refixed the references now. I prefer ALT2:.--Nvvchar. 14:49, 9 August 2013 (UTC)

Great. Article length, date, and compliance with policy is confirmed. ALT2 is interesting and verified by provided citations. --ThaddeusB (talk) 01:16, 10 August 2013 (UTC)