Template:Did you know nominations/Philo Power Plant
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The result was: promoted by 97198 (talk) 10:47, 22 January 2019 (UTC)
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Philo Power Plant
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Philo 6 sculpture at AEP Building
- ... that after the Philo Power Plant was demolished, Philo 6's rotors were utilized in a sculpture created by George Greenamyer...? Source: "his forte is kinetic art and the two turbine rotors mounted on five granite piers that AEP unveiled Oct. 7 are the latest in a series of moving metal sculptures Greenamyer has executed over the past 11 years" "Historic Philo Generating Unit 6 Becomes Part Of AEP Sculpture Display"
- Reviewed: 151 North Franklin
Created by FunksBrother (talk). Self-nominated at 19:11, 28 December 2018 (UTC).
New enough and long enough .Looks pretty good. I do think that you need to clarify to the reader what Philo6 is in the hook. The current wording is a bit confusing. How about: "that after the Philo Power Plant was demolished, the rotors of the Philo6 supercritical steam generator ...." — Preceding unsigned comment added by Damien Linnane (talk • contribs) 06:03, 29 December 2018 (UTC)
- I don't want to add more to the hook. Saying it's the first supercritical steam generator would be too easy. ALT1 ...that after the Philo Power Plant was demolished, the rotors from Philo 6's unit were utilized in a sculpture created by George Greenamyer...? FunksBrother (talk) 01:26, 30 December 2018 (UTC)
- I don't think ALT1 is an improvement. It still assumes the reader already knows what a "Philo 6" is. Do you even need to mention "Philo 6"? Can we just say "one of the generators rotors was used in a sulpture ..."? Damien Linnane (talk) 01:39, 30 December 2018 (UTC)
- Ok. ALT2 ...that after the Philo Power Plant was demolished, the rotors from the turbine were utilized in a sculpture created by George Greenamyer...? FunksBrother (talk) 02:16, 30 December 2018 (UTC)
ALT2 Good to go. :) Damien Linnane (talk) 02:44, 30 December 2018 (UTC)
- Ok. ALT2 ...that after the Philo Power Plant was demolished, the rotors from the turbine were utilized in a sculpture created by George Greenamyer...? FunksBrother (talk) 02:16, 30 December 2018 (UTC)
