Template:Did you know nominations/Optima Signature

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:24, 8 October 2017 (UTC)

Optima Signature

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Optima Signature

• ... that residents of the top 15 floors of the Optima Signature (pictured) have access to a private club in the building?
  • ALT1:... that all residents of the Optima Signature (pictured) have access to two floors of social and athletic facilities?

Created by TonyTheTiger (talk). Self-nominated at 16:52, 12 September 2017 (UTC).

• Is long enough, new enough, no plagiarism detected, and it isn't promotional. Good work! MidwestCuttlefish (talk) 18:34, 12 September 2017‎ (UTC)

• I replaced the image with the one that appears in the article. Yoninah (talk) 20:35, 30 September 2017 (UTC)

• I came by to promote this, but do not find the hook hooky. All luxury apartment buildings offer amenities. It would be more interesting to write, in a hooky way, that this luxury building contains two classes of luxury. Yoninah (talk) 20:37, 30 September 2017 (UTC)

• Well few residential condos are luxury condos. So this is still a pretty unique pair of facts.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 07:07, 2 October 2017 (UTC)

Is this what you want?:

• ALT2 ... that residents of the top 15 floors of the luxury apartment building Optima Signature (pictured) have access to a private club in the building, a premium luxury feature?--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 13:59, 2 October 2017 (UTC)

• @TonyTheTiger: I think you can add more description of what's in the building from footnote 1, instead of just calling it "athletic and social facilities". For a hook, I wonder if we could work something around:
• ALT3: ... that at the 57-story skyscraper apartment building Optima Signature (pictured) in Chicago, there's luxury ... and then there's luxury?
• ALT4: ... that the higher you go in the 57-story skyscraper apartment building Optima Signature (pictured) in Chicago, the more luxurious amenities you receive? Yoninah (talk) 21:15, 2 October 2017 (UTC)

• I oppose ALT4. There only appear to be 2 levels of luxury.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 16:58, 4 October 2017 (UTC)

• OK, let's go back to your original hook. Restoring tick per MidwestCuttlefish's review. Yoninah (talk) 18:24, 5 October 2017 (UTC)