Template:Did you know nominations/Open Arms (SZA song)
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The result was: promoted by BorgQueen (talk) 13:01, 21 March 2023 (UTC)
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Open Arms (SZA song)
- ... that a recent SZA song contains a tribute to her grandmother who died from Alzheimer's disease during album recording sessions? Source: NME, Okayplayer, Nylon
- ALT1: ... that a recent SZA song starts with a tribute to her grandmother who died from Alzheimer's disease during album recording sessions? Source: ibid
- ALT1: ... that a recent SZA song starts with a tribute to her grandmother who died from Alzheimer's disease? Source: ibid
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Edward Dando
Moved to mainspace by Your Power (talk). Self-nominated at 17:08, 16 February 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Open Arms (SZA song); consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.
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Hook eligibility:
- Cited:
- Interesting:
- maybe not
QPQ: 
- Not done
Overall: 
@Your Power: Good article but I don't really think the hook is interesting. Could you propose another hook? Also need a QPQ. Onegreatjoke (talk) 19:05, 19 February 2023 (UTC)
- @Onegreatjoke: Can I suggest one myself, in the meantime? Let me know if this could be OK.
- ALT1b: ... that a song from SZA's 2022 album, SOS, pays tribute to her grandmother, who died from Alzheimer's disease during the LP's recording sessions? Oltrepier (talk) 15:38, 20 February 2023 (UTC)
- I find that one too convoluted to be interesting. And @Onegreatjoke I agree the other ones aren't that eye-catching either, so here's one that's a little more narrative-heavy:
- ALT2: ... that upon learning of her grandmother's death while creating an album, SZA memorialized her by having one of its tracks begin with her voice? Elias 🌊 💬 "Will you call me?"
📝 "Will you hang me out to dry?" 16:54, 27 February 2023 (UTC)- For an ALT3, which I prefer the most because it's a little more outside-the-box compared to most song hooks: ... that a woman who died from Alzheimer's was memorialized by her granddaughter through posthumous vocals in a song? Elias 🌊 💬 "Will you call me?"
📝 "Will you hang me out to dry?" 17:22, 27 February 2023 (UTC)
- For an ALT3, which I prefer the most because it's a little more outside-the-box compared to most song hooks: ... that a woman who died from Alzheimer's was memorialized by her granddaughter through posthumous vocals in a song? Elias 🌊 💬 "Will you call me?"
- @Your Power: A QPQ is still needed. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 16:09, 26 February 2023 (UTC)
- Will get to this soon -Elias
- I'd like to second the proposal for ALT3. It's pretty unusual and intriguing and isn't reliant on knowing SZA is. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 03:38, 2 March 2023 (UTC)
- Thank you NHL ^^ And the QPQ is done ftr - @Onegreatjoke can we get an update on how this looks now? Elias 🌊 💬 "Will you call me?"
📝 "Will you hang me out to dry?" 15:01, 2 March 2023 (UTC)
A better hook. Onegreatjoke (talk) 20:48, 3 March 2023 (UTC)
- Thank you NHL ^^ And the QPQ is done ftr - @Onegreatjoke can we get an update on how this looks now? Elias 🌊 💬 "Will you call me?"
- I'd like to second the proposal for ALT3. It's pretty unusual and intriguing and isn't reliant on knowing SZA is. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 03:38, 2 March 2023 (UTC)
- Will get to this soon -Elias
