Template:Did you know nominations/Oliver Ortmann
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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:49, 14 June 2019 (UTC)
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Oliver Ortmann
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Ortmann at the European Pool Championship 2008 in Willingen
- ... that Oliver Ortmann became the first cue sports player to be awarded the highest German athlete's award - the Silbernes Lorbeerblatt?"Did you know .. / Did you ." oliverortmann.de. Retrieved 13 May 2019.
Oliver got honored by the german sports government in 1996 with the "Silver Bay Leaf", the highest german accolade in sports? (Silbernes Lorbeerblatt)
- ALT1:... that German pool player Oliver Ortmann was the first European to win the U.S Open Pool Championship?Dyer, R.A. (1 May 2005). Billiards: The Official Rules and Records Book. p. 183. ISBN 1-59228-744-1.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Im Eun-ju
- Comment: Let me know if there is anything else to do.
5x expanded by Lee Vilenski (talk). Self-nominated at 14:34, 13 May 2019 (UTC).
Full review to follow, but I wonder if a better hook could be proposed since I'm not sure if this Silbernes Lorbeerblatt award is well-known enough to work as a hook fact. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 02:22, 14 May 2019 (UTC)
- Hi Narutolovehinata5 - There are two hooks. Ortmann winning the US open is quite a big deal, even now. Despite not being a particularly well known award, it is the highest form of award for German athletes. I have reworded to say this. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 07:48, 14 May 2019 (UTC)
- I'll do the rest of the review soon, but I see some glaring article issues. In particular, the sentences "As well as a pool player, Ortmann is an accomplished poker player." and "Ortmann has also appeared at the WPA World Team Championships [de], in both 2010 and 2012, reaching the quarter-finals in 2010." lack footnotes. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 00:56, 16 May 2019 (UTC)
- Two statements missing a footnote is hardly a glaring issue; however I have sourced/removed. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 11:42, 16 May 2019 (UTC)
Sorry for the delay as I had been busy with other nominations. I think this should be good to go now as it meets article and DYK requirements, a QPQ has been done, and I did not find any close paraphrasing. Both hooks are approved: leaving the final choice to the promoter. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 02:05, 27 May 2019 (UTC)
