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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 15:10, 22 August 2019 (UTC)
... that for decades, Miriam Butterworth protested every Saturday in the center of West Hartford, against war, including those in Nicaragua, Iran and Iraq, as well as in opposition to nuclear arms?
... that for decades, Miriam Butterworth protested every Saturday against wars such as those in Nicaragua, Iran and Iraq, as well as in opposition to nuclear arms? [1]
Other problems: - I'm not really satisfied with this many commas being used in one sentence. Also, I don't see why to include West Hartford if there's no other context for the geographical location, and especially I don't see how that's important to the hook. Here's my alternative:
... that for decades, Miriam Butterworth protested every Saturday against wars such as those in Nicaragua, Iran and Iraq, as well as in opposition to nuclear arms?
QPQ: None required.
Overall: Approved the alternate hook epicgenius (talk) 00:15, 26 July 2019 (UTC)
- I'm not really satisfied with this many commas being used in one sentence. Also, I don't see why to include West Hartford if there's no other context for the geographical location, and especially I don't see how that's important to the hook. Here's my alternative:
Approved the alternate hook epicgenius (talk) 00:15, 26 July 2019 (UTC)