Template:Did you know nominations/Melissa Ede
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by valereee (talk) 14:29, 10 June 2019 (UTC)
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Melissa Ede
[edit]- ... that LGBT rights activist Melissa Ede won £4,000,000 on a scratchcard after she refuelled her car? Miss Ede said the £10 National Lottery scratchcard "just caught my eye" and she bought it with change from her petrol purchase.
ALT1:... that internet trolls wished LGBT rights activist Melissa Ede dead just days before she died?Article covers the story alongside a video of Ede discussing the threats.- ALT2:... that LGBT rights activist Melissa Ede wanted to become the first transgender woman on Mars? Article states "Check out the video above to hear more from Ede about her journey to possibly becoming the first transgender person on Mars." - The featured video sees Ede discuss her ambition to go to Mars as part of the Mars One project.
- Reviewed: Wildlife of Liberia
Created by Raintheone (talk). Self-nominated at 07:35, 15 May 2019 (UTC).
Claiming for review, with a tentative preference for the first hook. However, I'd suggest wikifying it or at the very least linking to scratch cards and making it clear that we're talking about British Pounds here. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 14:37, 16 May 2019 (UTC)
- @Narutolovehinata5: I have changed the original hook to include a link to scratchcards and made it clear it was British pounds.Rain the 1 10:50, 21 May 2019 (UTC)
- @Narutolovehinata5: Is that okay?Rain the 1 18:15, 25 May 2019 (UTC)
- Yeah it should. ALT1 and ALT3 are pretty good. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 22:23, 25 May 2019 (UTC)
- @Narutolovehinata5: Is that okay?Rain the 1 18:15, 25 May 2019 (UTC)
- Okay, giving this a review now. Article meets hook and DYK requirements, a QPQ has been done, and the article is free of close paraphrasing. There is a minor typo in the article: "her funeral will take place of" instead of "her funeral will take place on". ALT1 seems too mean-spirited, so I am only approving the original hook and ALT2. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 02:09, 27 May 2019 (UTC)
- @Narutolovehinata5:All done and ready to go?Rain the 1 15:23, 8 June 2019 (UTC)
Yes. Will leave the final choice between ALT0 and ALT2 to the promoter. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 09:55, 9 June 2019 (UTC)
