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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Theleekycauldron (talk) 02:04, 24 October 2022 (UTC)

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Mahurangi Harbour

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Mahurangi Harbor
Mahurangi Harbor
  • Source: "The southern right whale (SRW) is the baleen whale most closely associated with New Zealand because, in the past, they used to come inshore to sheltered harbours on the mainland to mate and calve (Carroll et al 2011). However extensive hunting in the 19th century depleted their numbers and shrank their range. Today the right whale population appears to be recovering and now are rarely but increasingly being sighted around the mainland. These areas include: East Coast, Hawkes Bay, Wanganui/Wellington, Mahurangi Harbour/Auckland, Otago, Kaikoura/Canterbury, Northland and Nelson (Patenaude 2003)." - source

Created by Prosperosity (talk). Nominated by SL93 (talk) at 20:15, 4 September 2022 (UTC).

General: Article is new enough and long enough

Policy compliance:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
QPQ: Done.

Overall: We need a citation still for the paragraph that ends with [...] entracne to the harbour. Everything else is fine. –LordPickleII (talk) 14:08, 8 September 2022 (UTC)

I added the missing source. SL93 (talk) 16:04, 8 September 2022 (UTC)
LordPeterII SL93 (talk) 16:05, 8 September 2022 (UTC)
Passes. –LordPickleII (talk) 16:19, 8 September 2022 (UTC)
@SL93: could you tell me what comes across as odd or hooky about this hook? I'm afraid I might be missing the point somewhere. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (she/her) 17:00, 6 October 2022 (UTC)
SL93 (talk) 18:39, 6 October 2022 (UTC)
theleekycauldron SL93 (talk) 21:32, 6 October 2022 (UTC)
SL93 (talk) 23:56, 6 October 2022 (UTC)
@SL93: hmm, maybe we can make it a little tighter?
I'd say these are better :) theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (she/her) 06:40, 7 October 2022 (UTC)
theleekycauldron
ALT1b: ... that Mahurangi Harbour is one of the few places in New Zealand where a southern right whale can be found resting or calving?
I'm just changing it a bit because the source refers to one country. SL93 (talk) 23:06, 7 October 2022 (UTC)
theleekycauldron What do you think? SL93 (talk) 20:36, 8 October 2022 (UTC)
ah, yeah, my mistake – I think that works :) theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (she/her) 22:02, 8 October 2022 (UTC)
A review of ALT1b is needed. SL93 (talk) 01:30, 9 October 2022 (UTC)
Approve ALT1b. It's basically how I understood the original hook; but you are right, it didn't actually read that hooky then. Struck the others. –LordPeterII (talk) 09:23, 12 October 2022 (UTC)
  • Can this be promoted already? It doesn't need the image. SL93 (talk) 01:11, 21 October 2022 (UTC)
  • I misread the source. Withdrawing. SL93 (talk) 16:03, 22 October 2022 (UTC)
  • ALT2 ... that after being extensively hunted in the 19th century, southern right whales have returned and can again sometimes be seen in Mahurangi Harbour (pictured)?
  • Nominator said at DYK talk they’d be happy if someone else took this on. This is what it says in the source, I’ve added this sentence to the article and used it for a hook verbatim. Schwede66 16:55, 22 October 2022 (UTC)
    Hook is in the article, sourced, and pleasing to read. CMD (talk) 19:06, 22 October 2022 (UTC)
    @Schwede66, Chipmunkdavis, and SL93: I'm not sure the hook checks out as-is; the source doesn't say that the whale left the harbour, although it does imply that sightings stopped. I'm not sure those are truly the same? theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (she/her) 19:24, 23 October 2022 (UTC)
  • ALT2a ... that after being extensively hunted in the 19th century, southern right whales can again sometimes be seen in Mahurangi Harbour (pictured)?
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