Template:Did you know nominations/Khá Bảnh

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The result was: promoted by SL93 (talk) 19:21, 18 April 2021 (UTC)

Khá Bảnh

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• ... that a dance move originally performed by Big Bang's G-Dragon suddenly became one of the most noticeable trends in Vietnam in recent years thanks to Khá Bảnh? "Không phải Khá Bảnh, từ 7 năm trước G-Dragon đã là 'ông tổ' khai sinh điệu múa quạt đình đám" [It's not Kha Banh,but G-Dragon who invented the famous 'fan dance' 7 years ago]. Rough translation: "... Fan Dance" (múa quạt) is a trend that originated from a famous YouTuber named Khá Bảnh. While many people believe the dance is offensive, there are also a large amount of people who get excited and try to learn the dance. It is believed that Khá Bảnh is the creator of this "Fan Dance". However, the leader of Big Bang [G-Dragon] should be recognized as the pioneer of this trend as "Fantastic Baby" was released back in 2012 when people still don't know who Khá Bảnh is ..." (... Những tưởng Khá Bảnh là người sáng tạo ra vũ đạo “xòe quạt” này nhưng thì ra thủ lĩnh Big Bang mới là người tiên phong cho trào lưu này bởi MV Fantastic Baby được phát hành từ năm 2012, cái thời người ta còn chưa biết Khá Bảnh là ai ...)
  • ALT1:... that Khá Bảnh's YouTube channel, which had more than 2 million subscribers, was immediately removed by Google for violating its terms of use after he was arrested by the police? "Google mạnh tay xóa kênh Youtube Khá 'Bảnh'" [Google forcefully removed Kha Banh's Youtube channel]. Báo Công an nhân dân điện tử (in Vietnamese); Vietnamese thug, former YouTube sensation jailed for running gambling ring (English language source)
  • ALT2:... that Khá Bảnh, who was sentenced to ten years and six months in prison, was cheered on like an idol by a large crowd that gathered around the district court of Từ Sơn during his trial? Về phiên tòa Khá Bảnh và văn hóa giang hồ [About the trial of Kha Banh and jianghu culture]. (in Vietnamese). BBC News Vietnamese

Moved to mainspace by Bkissin (talk). Nominated by Lệ Xuân (talk) at 17:24, 16 March 2021 (UTC).

• Comments by Tbhotch

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook eligibility:

• Cited:
• Interesting:
• Other problems:

QPQ: None required.

Overall: (CC) Tbhotch^™ 20:32, 16 April 2021 (UTC)

• @Lệ Xuân: In general it's OK, the main problem with ALT0 is the neutrality of "had suddenly become one of the most noticeable trends". I removed "conspicuous" because of the same reason, and that adjective implies "unwanted noticeability", which is not the case. However the wording still partly in the article and in the hook. A simpler "became a trend in Vietnam thanks to Khá Bảnh" is neutral enough. This also removes the "recent" issue as time is relative. ALT1 and 2 currently "focus unduly on negative aspects of [a] living individual". (CC) Tbhotch^™ 20:32, 16 April 2021 (UTC)

  @Tbhotch: Thank you for reviewing this article. As this is my first time nominating an article on DYK, I don't really know what to do to fix the problem. I assume that I should change the ALT0 to "... that a dance move originally performed by Big Bang's G-Dragon became a trend in Vietnam thanks to Khá Bảnh?" I would be very happy if you show me what to do next. Hankiz 22:04, 17 April 2021 (UTC)

• When that happens, you can propose new changes as ALTX: (where X is the next number). In this case, it is ALT3 ("... that a dance move originally performed by Big Bang's G-Dragon became a trend in Vietnam thanks to Khá Bảnh?") and I that one. I AGF in the foreign sources. (CC) Tbhotch^™ 18:54, 18 April 2021 (UTC)