Template:Did you know nominations/John Custis

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The result was: promoted by SL93 (talk) 00:51, 18 December 2022 (UTC)

John Custis

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... that John Custis's marriage was strained to where he would sometimes communicate to his wife through their enslaved servants? Source: Forman, Henry Chandlee (1975). The Virginia Eastern Shore and its British Origins: History, Gardens & Antiquities. Eastern Shore Publishers' Associates. ASIN B0006CMBNG. Page 57
- ALT1: ... that John Custis, a slaveowner, petitioned the Governor of Virginia to manumit a slave? Source: Wiencek, Henry (2003). An Imperfect God: George Washington, His Slaves, and the Creation of America. Farrar, Straus and Giroux. ISBN 978-1-4668-5659-2. Page 73
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Ryti–Ribbentrop Agreement

Improved to Good Article status by Dabberoni15 (talk). Nominated by Onegreatjoke (talk) at 21:53, 10 December 2022 (UTC).

Article was brought to GA-status, and nominated for DYK on due time. Iti is neutral and sourced througout. "Earwig's Copyvio Detector" reports no essential text similarities. I find the ALT1-hook interesting, but suggest a more clear one as follows: "... that slave owner John Custis petitioned the Governor of Virginia to manumit a slave child, he fathered?". You can recommend it as ALT2 if you like. The hook is well-formatted. Its length is within limit. For the hook fact's accuracy, I AGF since the source is offline.QPQ was done. Good to go. CeeGee 10:18, 11 December 2022 (UTC)