Template:Did you know nominations/Hevrin Khalaf

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:49, 10 November 2019 (UTC)

Hevrin Khalaf

(

)

... that the Kurdish civil engineer and politician Hevrin Khalaf was killed in the 2019 Turkish offensive into north-eastern Syria? Source: several

Reviewed: ~~to come~~
Comment: sad sad sad - the image is not free - better wording welcome

Created by Jwslubbock (talk), Thsmi002 (talk), and Volunteer Marek (talk). Nominated by Gerda Arendt (talk) at 14:25, 18 October 2019 (UTC).

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: Interesting:

QPQ: Done.

Overall: The hook could include more about Hevrin's achievements, but I'm happy to approve once the QPQ is done. OwenBlacker (he/him; Talk; please {{ping}} me in replies) 09:55, 20 October 2019 (UTC)

Thank you for the review, I reviewed now Template:Did you know nominations/The Elephant Queen.

ALT1: ... that the Kurdish civil engineer and politician Hevrin Khalaf, known for her diplomatic skills in negotiations with the United States, France and others, was killed in the 2019 Turkish offensive into north-eastern Syria?

ALT2: ... that the Kurdish civil engineer and politician Hevrin Khalaf, Secretary General of the Future Syria Party, was killed in the 2019 Turkish offensive into north-eastern Syria?

ALT3: ... that the Kurdish civil engineer and politician Hevrin Khalaf, who worked towards tolerance among Christians, Arabs and Kurds, was killed in the 2019 Turkish offensive into Syria?

It would be nice to be able to shorten the offensive, but I am not sure about political correctness. Tried in the last, - ccould be used for the others if acceptable. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 11:30, 20 October 2019 (UTC)

OwenBlacker, please look again. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 16:28, 5 November 2019 (UTC)

QPQ confirmed and I'm happy with any of the hooks — ALT1 is probably my favourite, with ALT3 a close second. Sorry for the delay; I only saw your message once you {{ping}}-ed me 😊 — OwenBlacker (he/him; Talk; please {{ping}} me in replies) 16:39, 5 November 2019 (UTC)