Template:Did you know nominations/Hamad al-Hajji

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The result was: promoted by CSJJ104 (talk) 20:24, 22 September 2022 (UTC)

Hamad al-Hajji

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... that Saudi Arabian poet Hamad al-Hajji lost three members of his family at childhood and later suffered from schizophrenia until he died at the age of 49 after a lung disease? Source: Hamad al-Hajji#Sources
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- Comment: There is some hooks in this poet life, i chose his early years and medical condition+death. Most biographers - not psychiatrists - of Al-Hajji related his schizophrenia to his childhood issues. He lost three members of his family when he was under 10; His widower father carelessness; Growed up by his older sister then moved to Riyadh at the age of 13, as a college student he saw no encouragement for his literary creativity, until he died at the age of 49 after a lung disease in a Psychiatric care center.

Some new sources have been written about him that I do not have access to them: Hamad al-Hajji#Further reading. "The story of Hamad Al-Hajji; new medical reading" wrote by two specialist physician who have examined his disease in a more scientific way. But based on current article sources, i guess we can find some hooks.

Created by Ruwaym (talk). Self-nominated at 17:01, 13 August 2022 (UTC).

Length and history verified. Sources accepted on good faith. But one passage in "Middle years" needs to be sourced. Daniel Case (talk) 02:38, 31 August 2022 (UTC)

Done. Ruwaym (talk) 20:14, 9 September 2022 (UTC)

Daniel Case, are you ready to continue the review: neutrality, copyvio check, hook, etc.? BlueMoonset (talk) 23:12, 16 September 2022 (UTC)

Not a review but isn't the hook pretty long? Maybe it's better to focus on just one or two aspects of his life instead of mentioning the family deaths, the schizophrenia, and his death at a young age? Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 03:33, 17 September 2022 (UTC)

Good now. Daniel Case (talk) 06:01, 20 September 2022 (UTC)