Template:Did you know nominations/Gaetano Faillace

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The result was: promoted by Crisco 1492 (talk) 13:51, 9 May 2012 (UTC)

Gaetano Faillace

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... that Japanese censors were horrified at Gaetano Faillace's picture of General Douglas MacArthur and Emperor Hirohito?

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Created/expanded by Esemono (talk).Self nom at 07:56, 2 May 2012 (UTC)

Since the hook is supposed to contain (pictured) when an image is included, adding that after "picture" will look odd. I suggest changing to "picture" to "photograph" as follows (and also "at" to "by"):

ALT1: ... that Japanese censors were horrified by Gaetano Faillace's photograph (pictured) of General Douglas MacArthur and Emperor Hirohito? —BlueMoonset (talk) 19:36, 3 May 2012 (UTC)
AGF on the hook citation. Article meets size/date requirements. Picture is fine (and if the hook runs the picture really does need to be included). I'm not entirely sold on the hook itself, though... what it might be nice to clarify either why it horrified them, or give more context which would explain why the image was controversial to the casual reader. That's not a biggie so I will give this a sign off :) (also; the article could do with a little copyediting) --Errant ^(chat!) 13:38, 2 May 2012 (UTC)